| "Face Down" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Jenny Dragon On: January 19, 2009 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not like you haven't heard this before but this is such a great fic and I'm very happy that you came back and finish this story even though it ended the way it did, it happens. Although I do hope this one shot becomes a full story because it has the makings of a great story line. Not that it is a wonderful story and very well written just please don't leave us hanging we all want to know if the right people make it out of this alive. God bless your writing and yourself as well,and if this stays a oneshot then this is a pretty damn good one. Thank you for your creativeness!! Please keep writing it does inspire me even though I can't write to save my life,there are times when I have my moments. Anyway if I don't stop now I don't think I ever will. You walk away from your computer with a big head and a big ego just remember... you absolutely deserve it. Thanks again!!
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:51 CST
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So what happens next?? Does Naraku survive and finally gets his revenge on Kagome and InuYasha, do they all die or does Naraku die and Kagome and InuYasha live happily ever after??? WE NEED TO KNOW!!!!! Please write 1 more chapter so we know what happens...*offers gummy bears*
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Reviewed By: Em On: January 19, 2009 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very beautiful. It made me really think about all the relationships in the world and how many end up similar to this.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cannot just leave it at that! Come on!!!!!!!! Where's your sense of honour! Tell us what happened after! Just one more chapter with a very happy ending. I'm begging you!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 03:14 CST
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...I got about half way through the first chapter before thinking, 'wow, this is really boring...' Sorry, but for some reason the summary interested me more than the actual story... Dont stop writting though, dont punish your readers just because one person didnt like your style...
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Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 10:18 CDT
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luv the story, please continue on writing it asap. I want to see to see what will happen next.
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Title: Face down
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this song and this story is Amazing!!!! I wonder whats gonna happen next?????Wait what is gonna happen next? Please update soon this is driving me crazy!!!!!!!! But Exellent job and I hope you keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 10:15 CDT
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Holy crud!!! Is he okay! Aack! Update! god god god god god god god god god god god god god god god god god pizza..... I'm scared! update!
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Reviewed By: omg! On: April 12, 2007 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you and this fic is aaaammmmaaaazzzinnng!!!! ^^ i hope you get that second chapter posted soon!
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Reviewed By: Langus 2.0 On: March 19, 2007 23:06 CDT
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This fic is truly sensational. I haven't read anything good on this site for a while but this chapter was just great. You have an excellent talent for writing. I look forward to reading your next chapter! Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I would like to say THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing a fic based of "Face Down" I have been looking for one for a while, and I even started writing one because it is such an amazing song and provides a really great basis for many ideas. I love that you used Naraku as the perpetrator, I was thinking of a cliche Kouga idea; but Naraku works so much better. I love the scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha and their relationship, it was very well thought out. I also liked your description of the abuse it was really real and heartfelt I think; and the emotions you put into the characters was very well thought out. There was one thing I noticed, was after Naraku beat Kagome when they were having sex she was riding him, and I just thought that was werid because it would seem to me that he would be forcing himself upon her; but that was just a side note. I really enjoyed this portion of the story. I was hoping that you would do the song justice, and you have! I'm so excited. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to the continutation. Poor InuYasha though :'( I feel so sad for him! I just want to hug him! and it sucks that Naraku takes it out on him; but he would have just taken it out on Kagome instead.. and it sucks that he's like that in the first place, but then again if he wasn't there wouldn't be a story.. haha I'm rambling. Anyway! Amazing Job and I'm so excited for this! ^^ Thanks for writing a very well written chapter, and as I stated I certainly look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have gotten into this fic and by the time I reached the end of the chapter I was looking for more. I can't believe that he would have gone that far to prove a point. It's bad enough that he beat on Kagome and she did nothing about it, but he has really crossed the line when you go and attack another person so much so that you put them in the hospital. Does he really think that Kagome could still love him if he attacked her friends? And plus the fact that she left the house without the sunglasses to cover her face now everyone will know what she has been hiding. I'm sure if it were me as one of her friends she would not be going back to Naraku at all. If not for herself then she should at least think about what he did to Inuyasha and make plans to get back at him. Make him pay for what he's done.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 07:54 CDT
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oh my god this story is awsome i couldn't stop reading it until i finished it. UPDATE PLEASE, sil vous plait, por favor, onegai, PLEASSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gillster On: March 18, 2007 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was great but the song made it better. i was sitting here listening to it as i read it .Please update
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