Title: Beautifully sad!
Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, but so sad. I really love reading works where Kikyo is shown for the remarkably complex character she really is, instead of the evil vindictive albatross that the vast majority of fan fiction writers make her out to be. I love how you put her together with Shippo in the wake of the final battle and the death of the InuTachi, and was really very moved by the portrayal of Kikyo's attempts to comfort him in his mourning. I was a little confused about the purpose of Kikyo's actions with the Shikon no Tama, but it is 4 am and I am half asleep. lol I gave a 1 for enjoyment only because it is rather hard to enjoy the fact that you killed everyone! lol
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