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| "Daddy, and mommy days" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Kawaii!
Reviewed By: KDH4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Katchi!! So kawaii! Your a great writer^_~ Thank you for reviewing me 2!!
| Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just to giddy for words. This story is bubbling with fluffy-ness. I don't have the slightest clue why no one has reviewed it yet. I think this was a wonderful idea about how the "parents" met and acted with each other. The title had me kind of stumped but I'm so happy I decided to read it anyway. I don't recall seeing any errors and there was enough detail for me to picture everything that happened. There isn't to much for me to say about the plot, it is a one~shot. However I can honestly say that this is one of the more orginal topics expressed in a refreshing fashion. I do hope all your work shows such stimulating style. Oh and I loved the way you touch on the "what if one of us dies and we have kids" subject. It makes a lot of sense in if you think about how things go in InuYasha. And I'm still smirking over the first half of the story. It just sounds like a true story, you know...
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