"The Butterfly Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Silly Symphony On: August 06, 2002 17:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow!!! This was just like reading one of the better stories in the original manga! I think you captured the style of Takahashi´s work *perfectly* and that´s not something I normaly see in 1 Ranma½ fic out of a 100... |
Reviewed By: Kurumi On: August 04, 2002 17:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay ! This was TOTALLY funny ! I loved the scenes with Konatsu and Mousse, and both the dialouge as well as the descriptions were hilarious. I MUST see more of this ! |
Reviewed By: Jonas On: August 04, 2002 14:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely Great ! I first came across your story at "Kaiphantom´s"-site, since then Ihave been checking back CONSTANTLY, in the hope of finding a new chapter. I also searched for it at "Fanfiction.net", at "The FFML-Mini Archive" and in a few search-engines until I finally discovered it HERE! Your story is definetly one of the best and especially one of the most Fun/Entertaining Ranma½§ stories that I have read and I really think you should post it elsewhere as well.
PLEASE keep writing ! |