| "Because you came in my life......" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ladyamazon14 On: July 13, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't tell me it's going to stop there! i want to know how kai plans to find her! don't leave me hanging like this! he's got to confess his love!
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Reviewed By: ladyamazon14 On: May 21, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a big twist. i don't know why but i don't trust the butler. His timing in every situation is too procise. so is akina an android like tala? i never knew....AWESOME!!!
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Title: impatient
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: May 19, 2007 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
this probably isn't my place to speak but if you ever need help with ideas for a chapter i would be happy to help.
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Reviewed By: ladyamazon14 On: May 15, 2007 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! Everything was perfect! (like kai) the second chapter made me cry. i'm a sap who can't stand tragities.but ahh, young love, it's so cute!
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