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Title: 0.o
Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: November 07, 2007 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only had the opportunity to read the first chapter but oh. my. god. do I love it! You're writing style is really well done. You use great description, it's not so much it takes away from the story, but I'm not like 'wait where is he what's going on?'. That characters are developing nicely. The plot is thouroughly intriguing. Billiantly done! I can't wait to read more, man I wish I didn't have class. Anyway, it's great. Great job. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up. It looks like this is going to be one of the best Yugi fics I've read in a long time. Excellent, I look foward to continuing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 08:23 CDT
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Kinda feeling bad for Otogi, he helps Jou and Seto out and Marik gets paid to sleep with his boyfriend. Next one is the last huh. Can't wait to find out how you end it.
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:12 CDT
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Poor Jou!! That was a great chapter. Honda is such a jerk leaving Jou like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:31 CDT
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Thanks for the quick update. Can't wait to find out about the double date. Should be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 19:29 CDT
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I wonder how come Honda doesn't care that he was cheated on? He probably has something on the side too. Can't wait for the next chapter; it is getting really interesting between Jou and Seto.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this fic a lot! It's sumthin' different. Ciao!
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:31 CDT
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This is a really great story! I have no idea why it isn't getting more reviews since it's so good. The writing is good, layout makes it easy to read, sweet with angst and drama thrown about, and I never think I've read anything that made me dislike that dice boy so much. Poor Honda, being stuck with him even when he knows he's cheating. ;.; Oh! And nice Pegasus! He's really creepy like he is in the show. Please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:05 CDT
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Getting interesting. I wonder what Pegasus has planned. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 22:45 CDT
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I enjoyed this chapter. But I think Seto should have been punished longer, he was forgiven way too easily. The spelling and grammer is much better this chapter. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable story, lots of fun to read. However the spelling and grammer errors do take away from the story. Other than that it is fun to read all the drama in Jou's life. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 04:48 CDT
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I like this fic so far but its in need of some serious beta-ing. Even a simple read through and spell check. Alot of reader, well at least so I've heard, will run for the hills at the sign of bad spelling. Me, I'm not so picky, lol. As long as I can understand whats going on.
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Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 14:59 CDT
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I´m at chapter seven and still enjoy your story very much. I just have one question. Why did you call Jou´s father Mr. Katsuya? You do know that Katsuya is Jou´s first name, do you? The same with Otogi. Kaibas secretary called him Mr.Ryuuji whle that is Otogis first name. Was that on purpose?
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Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 04:22 CDT
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I just read the first chapter- really promising, very interesting.
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Title: Yay ^.^
Reviewed By: angelisoncrack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Me Lovey Lovey! LoL I Nearly Screamed When I Reached The Last Posted Chapter "Noooo!!!" Especially At A Cliff Hanger Like That. You Must Must Must Update Please. I Was Overjoyed To Find Out This Was An Active Fanfic And Not Something That Was Given Up In 1994. This Is Active, Right? It Must Be!! LoL Ok Insanity Aside Please Update??
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: amazing On: June 16, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BLOODY FLIPPIN, FREAKING, FUNNING, F***ING AMAZING!
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