| "Hameru dano Monshi" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, another short sweet one. I love how you write and how you capture the characters so well. You always seem to capture the fact that Kagome loves Inuyasha so much she would do anything for him. Also you always bring great ideas to the forront too.
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Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 15, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent fanfic. You never dissapoint me.
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Title: HOT
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting premise for a lemon. I enjoyed it. Nice job!
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Title: AWWWWW
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 20:16 CDT
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That was another cute one on your part, but you always write cute stories! Another good one to add to my list!
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 23:03 CDT
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ok.. that was cute.. nt ur best.. but good ^_^... oh... and doesnt the title mean lyk "Have sex or die".. lol.. or be in pain. nt die.. one of those... its something like that right?
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: June 14, 2007 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Beautiful and exquiste example of your writing and the trilling pleasures I get from reading it!! Literary Goddess You are Awesome! Bravo!! Bravo!! I love it! Considering the word limit constraints of the challenge you met this Brillantly!! I loved the Primal-ness of the mating! In the whole story! The wildness of Inuyasha's untamed parts! How you bring forth the fact that he is also very much a demon and not completely human!! Whoot! Whoot!! I loved how Myouga does what he does best, and so very much in character, pop up when least expected provide the needed Information and disappears. The love scene was very hot!! I was fanning myself for quite a while afterwards! The way you described it and the way it painted images for me!! Now, I am confused by this part from: "There was that scent again...-til this-...happened when she returned, he ran." It honestly made no sense to me. Was Inuyasha sniffing at Sango's privates? Why was he so interested in Sango's scent? And why did Sango think it was Miroku? What has she and Miroku been up to that the others aren't aware of? And did Kagome go away from the group to go to the washroom? If so.. how did she get to be asleep later on? Perhaps maybe it needs more explanation to the background or more descriptions... A little more to ease the confusion. I do love how Kagome's heart knew what was to do and she accepted it. It shows her maturity in the situation that she would do whatever she can to save Inuyasha's ife and I loved that Inuyasha though rough still was tender with Kagome in his own way. I give this Many thumbs up!! Though I admit it.. I giggled at the image of Inuyasha's erection waving like a flag.. Got a silly image in my head.. Thanks so much for clarifying when this took place! Kudos!! I thoroughly enjoyed this oneshot vignette!! Thank you so very much for sharing it with us!! I can't wait to read more you!! You Totally Rock Literary Goddess!! I also liked how Kagome assured Inuyasha at the end and let him know she wanted more love scene with him later on!! So much like Kagome! I can see the fear Inuaysha must have felt when his dream/nightmare can true! (btw.. don't be bothered by the Blood and Tears comment.. each story needs to be accepted and treasured like the individual rare and precious jewels they are!) Please keep up the great work!! Look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one....LOVED IT!!!
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: InuYasha_Hentai_Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 18:22 CDT
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It wasn't your best, but it was okay. I am a huge fan and I check for updates often. I saw this One-Shot and pounced on it, looking forward to it. I was sorta disappointed. The lemon was way too short, and confusing. If he just went at her, wouldn't she be in pain the whole time? I didn't like that at all. It also contradicts Blood & Tears. Youkai InuYasha isn't that brutal, if that would have actually happened that way. Kagome was OOC. I don't think she would have immediately reached for him. I mean, it just didn't seem real at all. I was also very confused in the beginning. For some reason I thought it was Sango he was..sniffing? because the next paragraph says that Kagome was in the forest. It was okay, but it was definitely not your best. You are a great author, I adore your work, but this doesn't do you justice. I hate giving bad reviews, but I think you can handle it. I think you were way too good for this. I know you were limited in this, but your 100-word One-Shots beat this by a long shot. Also, I must ask: Is the update for Live & Let Die going to be soon? I love that fic, same for Blood & Tears. BlueFireyPhoneix@aol.com Yes, I know, the spelling is wrong. It was already taken...
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Reviewed By: Jaque On: June 08, 2007 21:01 CDT
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I personally think the characters are all a little ooc here. Inuyasha and Kagome are both too logical and level-headed as well as accepting of the situation, which makes the story and especially the lemon and the "morning after" a little stale I suppose. No passionate outburst as befit their years and usual character. Inuyasha seems to grow sensitivity as well as take out his foot from his mouth overnight. Not to mention the whole mating season frenzy is getting a little too cliche in the fandom in general, and judging by the quality of your writings I was expecting a little more I guess. Anyway, thank you very much for sharing and hope to see more from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [not signed in] On: June 08, 2007 15:55 CDT
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wow. that was sweet and nice. i luved ur lemon. not too much, just perfect. whatever u do, don't stop writing
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 06:30 CDT
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cool
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wonderful one shot ! Great job
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 22:26 CDT
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awww that was cute and lemony. everytime i see a new story written by you i know that its going to be a good one. keep up the great work!
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Title: Wonderful (as usual)
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great one shot! You do terrific work. You are the BEST Fan Fiction writter in my book!! Are you coming out with another chapter on Learning to deal 3? It's been a while and I'm going through withdrawls.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome what does the title mean? also are you still working on learning to deal 3?
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