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| "Ichigo's Funeral" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Byakushi_kun On: November 18, 2007 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that quite sad to tell the truth. I also found that how you looked at Ichigo's it was quite different to what I've ever read before. There are generally quite alot of fics about how Rukia joins ichigo on earth. A few about how he accidentally dies and then there's yours. There was a good bit of humour at the start and got more depressing I guess as it went on. I found that all characters reaction were quite IC for an event like this. Especially Inoue and Tatsuki. Personally I think I found this even more sad is because I always imagine Ichigo living out his life as much as he can. The thought of him choosing death is a bit disconcerting to me. Anyway regardless this is an aweosme fic, a one of a kind imo.
| Title: in which I embarrass myself XD
Reviewed By: wicked_liz On: October 20, 2007 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was...like beautiful, but like so real that I cried at the end, after I had finished reading, like a delayed reaction. Hence why I -2 points on the enjoyment. U broke my heart. Funerals are so awful, and so necessary. I remembered when my great-grandmother died when I was 10, all the traditions were secret. For traditional Hindu cremations, a wooden pyre is built, and the men take turns going around and lighting the fire. Mourners wear white, and there r lots of flowers. My aunt died about 2 years ago, she was Presbyterian, so we cremated her in a funeral home. It was so awful. I think that's what made this fic so lovely, all the elements of real grief were slowly grafted in, so it built up slowly and overwhelmed unexpectedly. With something like this it would have been so easy to slip into absurdity, but u managed to make it sombre yet still funny. I lol'd @ the ol'-timey Negro spiritual, like ur Southern roots r showing ;) But beautifully piece on death, mortality and how we say goodbye.
| Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like all of your fanfiction, especially the latest ones about Ishida and Orihime, they are really good. However, something is bothering me: In a few of your fics you mention that Ichigo always knew he would be with Rukia--I'm okay with that, but it almost sounds like (with Tatsuki's actions and Orihime's old crush)that they are together because of an obligatory compulsion rather than being in love with each other. I don't know, just a thought. This fic was good and kind of funny/creepy. Good job. Tituba.
| Title: nice
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good read- rather sentual. it was very...very long. Love the pairings!! There was only a little bit of Rukia in there, though. T_T I don't know why, but I ound this kinda morbid. funny story, I like seriously JUST read this at fanfiction.net! I literally finished reading it, dodged over to mediaminer, and here it is! creepy, ne?
| Title: creepy
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
The first part if funny but it gets creepy as it advances. Well I guess going to your own funeral would be very creepy.
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