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| "Under The Influence" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! I kept thinking, 'they're on the second floor. How can everyone not notice what they're doing?' I burst out laughing at the part where Hiei saw Kurama looking up at them. XD I liked this one... It was more funny/sentimental. ^^ --Hope you're feeling better--
| Title: Yay! I'm first!
Reviewed By: Raeko On: June 28, 2007 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, oh my... *wipes tears from eyes* That was a scream! I loved it! I was sitting here in my apartment alone, howling with laughter when Kurama looked up and saw them--my neighbors must know I'm crazy by now--and then to have it all interspersed with one of your trademark lemons...oh, that just about made my day. Thanks Ryu--you always come through!
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