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| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] | Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story I hope you update soon, it's to soon to end now. You're doing great.
| Title: Mneh! *indigant noise*
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*huffs* i still cannot believe you only have 83 reviews!! This story is fecking ace...and yah, i'm reading it again because I love it so much (I've also started printing it out so I can put it in a folder and worship it *sniggles*) Seriously though, it's so fecking brilliant it needs more than 83! There should be hundreds, HUNDREDS I SAY!! *mutters about stupid people not reading and reviewing* Well i'm gonna carry on reading it now, please please update soon and i'll prob be reviewing an insane amount *grins*
| Title: YEE!
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! *grins* we luffles Tong...hehe yeah for Piccolo/Tong *noddles* I'm so happy u updated! I'll have a grin on my face aaaaaaaaall day now, Thank yooooooooooou! Poor Vegeta and Goku...they're both hurting... *sighs* I hope they'll be alright. Update soon!! Please please please!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Jeezuz!! This is such a great fricken story! You must write more, like right now! I command it! It took me two days to read all 37 chapters, now dont make that time wasted by not updating soon!! You've got all the characters down perfect, and the story is just excellent. Despite the fact there are a load of characters you've somehow made it so each and every one of them gets their own part and no ones getting confused over who's who. Spice is great, I love that girl! Especially when she got Vegeta...how was it...shitfaced *snickers* And it's great (well not great but y'know) how she has her own problems to deal with but how they all tie in with the main plot. We need Vegeta back! What's he doing out there all on his own? And poor Goku, the guys been through so much and now Veg's just up and left, he doesn't deserve it...nope nope. *grins* Piccolo...just...rules, no more than that. You've got his character completely aced, and he's a complicated person to get to grips with. I'm waiting for Tong (luff him btw! ^^) to realise that Taiger's a git and just go off with Piccolo *nods* would make an interesting couple, yahuh. Well...WRITE MORE! I COMMAND IT AGAIN! *whines* pleeeeeeeeeease...
| Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your wish is my command, dear melody. *smirks* One update. Now I require your soul.
| Title: PiccoloLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello? Helloooooooo?? Hey, you! Where are you?! Why haven't you updated?!? Pleeeeease update soon -- I'm going crazy not knowing what happens!!! *puppy dog eyes* Pweeze?
| Reviewed By: lee-lee On: June 01, 2004 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the story again. It is sooo good. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 01, 2004 01:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love the story please update soon or finish it .
| Reviewed By: Kathryn On: April 20, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent!! I enjoyed reading this; humor, romance..the whole nine yards!! Great job!!!!!
| Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: April 15, 2004 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me again. I see you've finally uploaded another chapter...Still great as ever -- keep at it!!! (And thanx for your clarification at the beginning...it really helped!) Later!
| Title: Chapter 36
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plyric *screams in frustration!!!* I so love this fic, but when did it move away from G/V to focus on their brats and grandbrats? Yes, I adore Spice, but reading about her training some ningens in a dojo is not that interesting to me. Frankly, I skimmed the rest of the chapter until I found anything to do with either Vegeta or Goku. I love your fic, but will it ever return back to G/V? I mean, whether they have a happily ever after or not, do you plan on returning back to just them?
| Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 31, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not tell you how much I love this story!!! It is, without a doubt, the BEST story I have read in...well...who knows how long! The details and descriptions you have are amazing -- you make the characters and backgrounds so real, they practically jump off the page! I have also enjoyed the way you refere to Goku as "the tall one", etc., and all the other "nicknames" you have come up with for the others, too. This is a very unique Goku/Vegeta story...I think it was very original to have Goku be the one to "start" the relationship. And creating the extended families of both, not to mention working them into your fic -- pure genius! As for Vegeta's character, you have done an OUTSTANDING job of keeping him the same old Vegeta we love to hate, while, at the same time, adding a depth to his character/background that is unlike anything I have ever stumbled across! (Can you tell I love this story, or what???) One more thing...just a hunch here, but are you planning to persue a Tong/Piccolo relationship at all? If you are, here's a piece of advice: DON'T -- you WILL regret it! (And no, that's not a threat...it's a promise.) Okay, all *ahem* joking aside, I really do not think that that would add anything to your story at all. I mean, think about it: you already have a great, multi-facited story with really interesting characters, so why take a chance of ruining it? I mean, yeah, Tong may need some comforting in a little while (...maybe), but trust me here -- Piccolo is a MUCH too complicated character to try and understand. I know it's an interesting challenge (believe me, I'm in love with the guy!), but you've already worked wonders with Vegeta...don't risk it, okay? In conclusion...(and congrats, this is officially THE longest review I have ever written -- or plan to write)...I hope I didn't insult you 'cause I really do love your story, stick with it, and WRITE FAST!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! :)
| Reviewed By: Kieran On: March 15, 2004 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I've read this fic about 5 times by now and I still love it! Thank Kami you finally updated...I was starting to wonder whether you'd given up on the story or not. Is it just me or is Taigar a bit of a suspicious character? *chuckles* can't wait to see what you have planned for him.
| Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I just found this. Had I found this this last year you would have lost me between updates. Although I am still highly disturbed by the pairing, The fact that I read all 35 chapters should tell you how good it is and that you need to update. I liked Spice at first but her self pittying witchy streak is beginning to wear thin. Why do you encourage us to read between the lines if your not going to follow what's written there? Vegetas musing about space at the End of Chapter 13, Unknown strong guy showing up , Someone being shocked over Spice's tail, Pan suddenly having problems with *children* at her dojo, Vegeta's constant bad dreams *cough*sixth sense*cough* about death and destruction.... Oh well to late now. I was obviously reading too much into it.
| Reviewed By: Mistress Asia On: March 06, 2004 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. I LOVE THIS STORY!! if i could give it a higher rating i would give you 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 times that by like the highest # in the whole... well there's nothing high enough to rate this. IT IS THE BEST OF THE BEST!!! thats just a fact. i have read millions and millons of stories of all kinds and yours surpassed them all. (sory to all other writers, but its true)PLEASE PLEASE keep writting. ~~ Mistress Asia (aka... Lady Asia)~~
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