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Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 22:34 CDT
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I love this story!! I love how similar the characters are to the actual ones. In some stories the author totally changes the characters, but I think you have done so well in keeping the characters to the actual selves. This story is really good! I really enjoy reading it!!! Please write another chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i liked how you went from inuyasha personally to kagome. please don't take to long to write more.
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 04:03 CDT
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you have to keep going with this, its soo good! and the hot and heavy tree scene kinda had me going :P
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... it's cool for kagome fighting for a change... it's better than just watching everyone fight... wonder what happens now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Zephyr_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your installments so far. I noticed in the text you had some minor misspellings and you put note of one of them. Sang's weapon is Hiraikotsu and Inuyasha's is Tetsusaiga or Tessaiga, it can be spelled either way. I shall await the next chapter valliantly!
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Title: WEEE!!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO! Write! I'm ready! I'm ready! I'm ready eddy eddy eeedddyyy! ^^ great chapter! I'm lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too good! Creative, passionate, and real funny, too! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:31 CDT
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This was an awesome chapter. I'm with Inuyasha, I believe Sesshomaru has an alterior motive besides what he said for leaving Rin with Kagome. Good thing Miroku had a talk with Inuyasha, he may be a pervert but he is insightful. Please let Kagome be alright, Inuyasha will never forgive himself if something happens to her. Well until next time,happy writing.
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Reviewed By: jadelightningwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For really just messing around I must compliment you. You've certainly grabbed my attention and I must say I quite enjoy your writing style. The story is very well fitted and you have an excellent grasp of Kagome and Inuyasha's personalities. Good pacing and just the right mix of dialog versus action and description. I encourage you to continue. I'd love to read more, especially given how hard it is to find decent Inuyasha fanfiction among all the...less-than-decent fiction.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 07:47 CDT
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Good chapter. You left it cliffy enough to make me look forward to the next. I liked it. Characters stayed consistant, and the build up to action at the end was good.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... good thing inuyasha & kagome are talking... they're good together... hope kagome will be fine... wonder what happens next... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was awesome!! you'r such a great writer!!! I LOVED READING IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I CAN'T WAT TO READ THE NEXT PART!!! YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 12:17 CDT
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Damn that Shippo for ruining my almost lemon. I'm glad that Kagome feels the same way about punishing him, I hope Inuyasha pounds his little mischevious ass so he'll know to stay outta grown folks business. Hmmm, now those two have opened a door that can't be closed,just don't let them get all stupid with each other and go into denial again. Well until next time, happy writing.
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to read it again. WONDERFUL! Please MORE MORE MORE!!!
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