| "Halfbreed" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 20:55 CDT
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Oh wow! I read the first two chapters of this fic... months ago I guess it would be, but I forgot to bookmark it and couldn't find it afterwards. Now I've found it and bookmarked it. *evil grin* so you'll have to put up with reviews from me from now on.
Anywho if you have yet to guess I LOVE this fic. Its sad and well, kinda depressing, but you write it very well. Cant wait for the next chapters!
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: AGalaxiaGoddess On: July 20, 2002 10:39 CDT
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What a tender moment. I'm glad those two are patch up, but I know it's not going to last for long, huh? That's a shame. |
Reviewed By: AGalaxiaGoddess On: July 20, 2002 10:24 CDT
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First, the chapter. This was extremely short, but it was still great. I gotta say, Bra is luckier than Trunks. For a minute there, I thought they were really neglecting Trunks, only to find out that they, well mostly Bulma, didn't know how to approach him. I can see the logic in that. I'm glad to see that their marriage is being repair.
Um, do you know that ff.net is back? Should I put this in that review too? Okay, see ya! |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Saiyajin Princess On: July 10, 2002 10:36 CDT
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damn, that was sad... but it was good... keep it up! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien On: July 09, 2002 22:10 CDT
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originality ... you are a god... I don't think I've ever read something even remotly resembling this... and it is well writen |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic, girl! You're doing a fantastic AWESOME job with it! Keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Erica On: June 21, 2002 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Perfect Score! This fic is awesome and people who aren't reading it don't know what they're missing. Its interesting to see how Vegeta reacts with the prospect of having to kill his children. We see the real Vegeta No Ouji! WhooHoo! Update SOON! |
Reviewed By: Saiyasith On: June 21, 2002 11:03 CDT
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Really great chapter, girl, but then, that's to be expected! This is so my fav ficcie right now!!! I hope all goes well with the writing... and uh, what about the dragonballs??
'Geta was soooo cuddly here... |
Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 17:12 CDT
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I like it already, nice and dark. Keep it up, you've got tallent. I want to see how it all turns out. |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: June 20, 2002 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't you TELL me you were on mm.org? Huh? HUH???
*sobs* You don't love me anymore!!!!
Oh well. Frickin' awesome story, yo. Made me all sad and teary-eyed because, damn. You know how I get, with Veggie and angst and oh jeez I need to go read something happy (that will probably end up being way lame, but after reading all your MAGNIFICENT stuff I think I'll survive). |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 20:20 CDT
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Ok, so, I'm sitting here, having just read those two frickin' awesome chapters, all teary-eyed and everything, and then WHAT do I see?
"Waka waka doo doo yeah!"
WTF? So of COURSE I HAVE to start thinking about that place where the the sun is always shining and the air smells like warm root beer and the towels are oh so fluffy! And it just totally ruins that mood I was so happily getting into! AAAARRRRRRGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!
...Well, to cut a long story short, he got away with my snorkel. But I made a solemn vow right then and there that I would not rest, I would not sleep for an instant, until the one-nostrilled man was brought to justice... |
