| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Title: Another great chapter
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Out of curiosity what rank is the Kyubi? Because in my opinion he is far beyond S Class. Also I really liked the duels. Also didn't you mean Wargreymon? Also I see that you took my suggestion for Jaden's partner. Also something tells me that Hermos is going to combine with the Kyubi card sometime in the future. Perhaps it could become sword similar to Cloud's from Advent Children only with nine blades instead of seven. Plus maybe Sasuke could be the one to bring Sakura back from the Society of Crap(Feel free to use that insult). Finally I can't wait for your next update.
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Title: Great Story so far.
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found this story. Could never find it simply by looking up you pen name. Anyway, I like it a lot. I noticed a few similarities to Darkness Moon but not a lot and I like that you made it it's own story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad you left at least one of the scouts on Serena's side even though you did in Darkness Moon as well. I would have voted for Amy but then I remember that Raye/Rei would be good to because of her kick butt attitude. Please update soon and I'll catch you on the flipside. Oh by the way, unless you're planning on your usuall pairings of Bastion/Amy, Lita Tyranno, Mina/Atticius, and Rei/Alster, Might I suggest bringing in the Generals on the good side of the line this time. Just a suggestion. I like the Scout/General pairings if their done right. You could still do the evil Generals and either make them clones of the real Generals or traitors/Siblings who killed the real Generals during the Silver Millinnium in order to take their place. To explain a female Zoicite instead of a male one, simply say that she and the other Dark Kingdom Generals taunted the Scouts with their lovers death. If it works. That's all I got to say. Until later.
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Title: HoneyBear2017@aol.com
Reviewed By: Lady Akatsuki On: September 10, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havn't seen a story like this before. I've seen a few InuxYGOgx's B4 but they have little to no dueling in them. I only ask one thing, Well actually 3 things. 1) Can you put more Kagome in this There's very little of her in this story compaired to everyone else. 2) Can you pair Kagome with Chazz or Zane? I hate Inuyasha, he cheats on her to much with Kikyo. 3) Can you make Kagome a sailor scout too or at least have something special about her? Please update this soon. :O)
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 18:25 CDT
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I can't believe I didn't read this!!!!! It was so incredible I'm already hungry for the next chappie!!!! This and Darkness Moon are so good you inspired me to write a story . . . kinda like yours but I hope you'll read it. It's called The Treasured Era. I'll post it by Sunday night. Thanks!!!! Okay now, onto the story. Few errors, and a kick butt plot!!!!! And TYRANNO!!!!! WWWWEEEEE!!!! I love you Tyranno . . . Ahem, so it was well done, I hope to see more ASAP!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 00:37 CDT
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Another Great chapter. Sorry it took so long to review I have only been up for an hour. I like the looks of that Inu-no-Taicho card. Also don't forget my suggestion of Jaden being partnered to Guilmon.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So cool! I like this chapter. Keep up the good work. One thing, could Kakashi and the others from Konaha show up after Alexis is freed from the SoL. After I read about Alexis being trained by Tsunade I keep getting an image in my head of Jiraiya getting super-punched by Alexis and he ends up hitting one of the pillars that surround the main building of Duel Academy. I'd that to happen in this fic, that would be very funny. Anyway keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: September 03, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd put 20 on the ratings if i could! You fuse anime so well. Thanks for making the duels more intense too, nothing i like better than bleeding white dorks!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:55 CDT
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Hey, nice chapter! Now I wonder what'll Kagome's reaction to find out that Inuyasha's beads were gone from his neck.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 22:48 CDT
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Hey nice chapter! I can see that you used one of my elements from the 'All fair in Love and War' fic. I was wondering if I could use those duels with the Light Bridge in my fic, please?
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Title: Another great chapter
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 20:53 CDT
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I really enjoyed this last chapter. I like the fact that my Kyubi card is getting a lot of airtime. Plus great way to reveal Serena's Keei Genkai.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great great great chapter is was so good please upload a lot of chapters they are so good we're all with u
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Title: SO COOL!! SO KICK ASS!!
Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOO COOL! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! I WANT TO SEE MORE OF THE GOODNESS THAT IS YOUR CREATIONS!! I NEVER THOUGHT I'D LIKE A FIC MORE THAN I 'Destiny Stars' AND 'Darkness Moon' BUT THIS FIC IS SLOWLY BECOMING MY FAVORITE OUT OF ALL YOUR YU-GI-OH GX FICS!! You have my permission to borrow Lena and Kittuna when ever you wish if you need have personal assistants. Keep up the good work. ^____^
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Reviewed By: Power-Of-Light (FF.net) On: August 22, 2007 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another fantastic, can't wait to see Chapter 3!
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