| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Chapter I hope they can save Rei from herself
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 12:44 CDT
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Hey, it's me! I'm sorry for the long reply, but I'm here! I'm glad that you're using my OC, Megumi. Also, I was wondering in the next chapter if you'd do more Fang and Koga insulting each other and Melody/Fang interaction where Fang tries to glomp Melody over and over again, but ends up kicked into the air by Melody over and over again. Also, Izayoi comes over to help him, wanting Melody to have herself a mate and leaving Inuyasha and Kagome alone, which the first few have failed.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 19:57 CDT
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Moving is tough. Especially when you are moving out on your own. Anyway I hope that Yusei ends up with Akiza.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me! Sorry that I didn't put a review up right away! I liked what you did with my OC, Feng, and you got the characteristic right. I also found it funny at this quote: Feng then uses super-speed to go over and kisses her right hand in which in return Melody beat him into the ground with her declaring the words `Die, bird!' and such before her mother and father yanked her off him. I like that and I hope that things similar to that comes more often in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 00:46 CST
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Another great one. I actually don't have any comments this time other than that.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 06:28 CST
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Great New Chapter
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Reviewed By: A On: December 21, 2008 22:52 CST
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I Kind of would like to know how Naruto got the Kuby card.
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Title: some new cards
Reviewed By: ovidkid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 14:53 CST
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heres some card you might like to use http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Wrath_of_Neos http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Detonating http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Berserker_Crash http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Evolution_Burst
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 00:55 CST
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Another great one. Though I kind of wish that Naruto had shoved So'unga through Pein's chest.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 13:00 CST
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Ihope things get better for you Gallantmon!!! I love this story, so interesting so far, and I'm enjoying the way you portay the charcters. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 08:23 CST
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I like that chapter, with Yusuke finally dueling his 'Signer' dragon! I hope that you're still here for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 03:11 CST
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I was wondering when those two would get together. Also I see another potential pairing in the future. On the subject of Prince Diamond how about you have Itachi take him down. Say do you think you could give Itachi a Silver Millenium past? Also perhaps Itachi and Sasuke could trade eyes so that they will no long have to worry about the defects of the Mangekyo Sharingan. Sorry for taking so long to review.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 14:46 CDT
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Dear Gallantmon, Bravo. I enjoyed this chapter and the way you're focusing on other things all at once, it's amazing. I have problems with that. ^^ But hey, practice right? I still appreciate the way you've portrayed my OC's and I hope they are helpful in the future. (coughcoughwinkwinnudgenudge say no more lol)
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 16:14 CDT
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Great chapter as always! I hope that with Izayoi would training Inuyasha and Melody to harness their Kekkai Genkai and her special teleportation jutsu. Plus, I hope that Genkai and Izayoi team up to put Inuyasha and Melody into a harsh training resume to harness their new powers. It sucks that your dad got a 'removal' from office slip and you're right, it's not fair! When this is over, I hope that your dad's boss gets the book thrown to her face, metaphorically and literately.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Title: Ancient fairy draong
Reviewed By: ovidkid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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Here's the remaining two of the five dragons and their effects http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ancient_Fairy_Dragon http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Power_Tool_Dragon
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Title: Well Done!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter well done my friend. I can't wait to see what you do next. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, nice story! Hope to see more of it!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 15:24 CDT
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You're doing quite well gallantmon! I'll send you a message later with some other specifics you may need for the Treasured Era things . . .
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Title: Nice chapter
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Danny nice job with the new update,you sure know how to keep the action going and to that Aarik jackass,if you don't like this story don't read it,simple as that,Danny has the right to do whatever he wants,he's the author,not you,Danny don't listen to that stupid ass dork,he's not worth it,you just keep doing what you do best is to bring good action in your cool fic. BEWK
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Title: oh?
Reviewed By: Aarik Wrath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 05:11 CDT
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i dont know what im talking about? i said he has a mary sue(usagi) and mary sue are a major story nagetive witch is wildly believed to be true.i said he makes to many oc's and there's about 20 of them not even half way thru so thats true to.i said that oc's automatically become far far worse when related to one of the main charecter's of one of the anime/manga in the crossover this is true most of them are.i also said that them being as stated in the previous sentence makes them like a crappy author self insert and it does self insert's always suck because they are 1.related to one of the main cast and nothing canon changes making it unrealistic or 2.so freaking Godmoded that nobody cares about them and people leave the fic.and finally i said he could do better then this and he can i know it ive seen him do better then this but ive also seen people do far worse.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 23:58 CDT
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My money is on Itachi is alive and that Sasuke's new power is his Mangekyo Sharingan.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:06 CDT
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Oh and don't listen to Aarik Wrath, since he has absolutely no idea what he's talking about. I hope that in this story that you're not breaking up any couples here or I'll be very disappointed and very disappointed that your internet will be gone and your father loses his case. But there's one thing that I don't follow. In case that your father does win and you say that the internet is still in question, what does that mean?
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:01 CDT
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Nice chapter and I hope that it doesn't come to you losing the internet. I hope that your father gets to keep his job.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great Story
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Title: the enemy of mary sue
Reviewed By: Aarik Wrath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to stop during the battle with the light of destruction i couldint take it anymore the blatent Sue that is Usagi i mean MARY SUE MODE FULL POWER! what the fucking hell its like you did the opposite of other writers instead of starting bad and getting good you started awesome then came up with this..this..thing this fail thing this unforgivable black hole of total failure And the oc's!oh god the oc's EPIC FAIL there's to god damn many you just cant expect most readers to keep track of that many people it hurts the brain and limits charecter devolopment infact most of your sailor moon crosses and fics tend to have this problem tone it down some i mean not everyone needs to be a sailor senshi or solar senshi its why i cant finish any of them then again maybe i just dont like sailor moon and dont take this personaly its not like i said YOU FAIL AT WRITING FOREVER!mary sue charecters just suck on principle thats just how it works.same thing goes for to many oc's especially when there related to one of the crossed animes main charecters combining them just increases the fail and makes seem like a crappy authors attempt at a self insert i know you can do better then this ive seen you do better then this.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 22:46 CDT
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Please update!! I love this chapter have Inuyasha as Taigoku and Melody as Valkyrie Sailor Big Bang fight more often.
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