Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Kate the InuYoukai01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WTF!? I am not heavy, you asshole! And why do you suddenly think you can tell everyone how sensitive my back is? Hm? Hm? Lol, J/K... it was a good first chapter. I'll have to edit it for you, though. Minor spelling mistakes and sentence fragments is all. Oh, and if you give me the down-low on the next chapter, I can work on some fanart, too, if you want!
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