Reviewed By:RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 19:32 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review: You really need to fix your spelling and grammar. REALLY badly. You have no punctuation what so ever. There are barely any periods at the end of the sentences. You write Kagome's name as "gome" when it should be "'Gome." Notice the apostrophe before the name and the period at the end. The apostrophe notes that some of the name has been taken away. You should re-read your story and spell check it, grammar check it and possibly have a beta work on it. Good luck.
Reviewed By:unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 23:58 CDT Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: interesting story... kinda cool having kagome be mate to both inuyasha & sesshoumaru... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
