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Reviewed By: lovininu28 On: February 09, 2009 20:16 CST
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I have to say that I just finished your fic and I really love it. It left me in tears. I thought it was lovely and very well written. I felt as if I were immersed in their feelings and you will get no higher compliment from me, because I feel that a truly good piece must let you connect with it's characters. Thank you so much.
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Title: Whew!
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, you have produced another wonderful story! It was moving in all the ways that matter. I cried, I laughed and I was compelled to click on the 'next' button as quickly as I could get the cursor over it. I was so worried at the end that this was going to turn into one of 'those' morbid endings, but thank you so much for turning it around and saving Kagome's man. I wondered if he brought himself back, or was it an act of the Gods? It was a mysterious ending, but a happy one, and that made everything okay. The tale of the raven and the swan was portrayed perfectly in Sesshomaru's determination to shed his demonic nature. Great job, as always, thanks for the read! ~Rin
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Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 00:16 CST
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That was absolutely amazing. This is one of the few stories that have kept me from my precious sleep. Congrats to you, you have made a perfect story.
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Title: CUPIDS DATING SERVICE
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww ~kags- i like the bird thing. Swan. Raven. -sigh- ~sessh- atlest im still a lord. ~tba-.. and to think u guyz are married. ~inu- -anime sweat drop- yea.. he.. he. ~tba-looks at inu- ok. ill take the shot. who did u pair me up with this time? ~kags- huh? ~inu- im a dating service 4 her. she beats the crap out of every guy i send her way. ~tba-smile-yep! i dont know when 2 give up! ~inu- i sent naraku this time. ~tba-shakes head- poor naraku. ill have to teach him that when he messes with black fire. he gets a 3 degree burn! ~all- why black? ~tba- black fire. theblackangel. duh. -opens door- ~naraku- falls onto ground. uh.. hi tba. ~tba-tisk tisk. naraku. u need 2 get a life. ~naraku- but i- ~tba- ur not my type-helps him up- and i dont want a relation ship -pushes him out door- ~naraku- but i- ~tba-slams door in his face- dont care!!! ~ All-BYE!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChiyoChiyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far one of the best one-shots I've read. Your style is flawless. I especially love the little story you based the fic on. Genius. The entire thing was so cute, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting and the best part is; it turned out very well in the end.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 13:51 CST
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I love reading this one
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Reviewed By: MineChan On: November 15, 2007 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow.. this is like one of the best stories i've ever read.. i love it.. you are a really good wrighter... keep us wanting to read more of your great stories... ^_^ some people piss me off.. cuz of the whole seshomaru and inuyasha coming to the future type thing.. but yours was just ... i couldn't stop reading.. and that takes some mad skills... hahahahaa.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 01:12 CDT
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That ... was simply ... stunningly brilliant. Nothing I could say would do it justice. The concept, and the way you drew out such a magnificent, detailed EPIC ONE-SHOT from a prompt and a 4-line fable just makes me want to throw myself on my quill pen and give up writing forever. (Unfortunately for everyone, I don't own a quill pen.) I now have a new all-time favorite Sess/Kag story, and a new author to read. Kudos, my friend!
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Reviewed By: AmandaGrace On: October 08, 2007 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story. It was really long, and I was super tired before starting it and honestly I didn't think I was going to finish it tonight, but once I started reading I just couldn't stop. It was addictive..just like peanut butter :) ahaha. I can't say what was so great about it because I really am no good with words, but it might have been the way it flowed, or the words used or how deep it was, but I still absolutely loved it. Great job, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ForestBrookBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 01:16 CDT
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I loved it. I spent an hour reading it instead of sleeping, but it was well worth the hour!
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Title: dfgiu
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw that was so cute! i though a t the end it was goign to be one of those single-mother-raising-child-of-dead-father things but then it wasn't ! it was so good!
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Reviewed By: Kanochan On: September 14, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one-shot was truly breathtaking! I read till 1 in the morning I couldn't stop myself. Your idea of Sesshoumaru wanting to be human because of his past is so creative and original and the comparison with the raven and the swan was very poetic...well as you can guess I enjoyed you fic greatly and I can not hope you will keep writing! ^.^ thak you for sharing this with us
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 14:16 CDT
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Ahh...how satisfying. Just like peanut butter. ^.^ Always a treat to have something from you. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just remember that dogs are "color-limited," and not "color-blind." Other than that your story is AWESOME!!! I love your stories! Take care of you.
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