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Reviewed By: jen15 On: November 07, 2007 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy your style of writing, and your story is well thought out. Your grammar could use a little work, a few words flipped around but nothing to lose sleep over nor does it affect the story itself. hope to read more soon. thanks
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
As a fellow fanfiction writer I can tell you from experience that readers here at MediaMiner just despise reviewing. I'm not sure why exactly, but they do. I think the best measure of whether people like your stories or not is how many hits you are getting per chapter. It shows that people are interested enough to continue reading your fic at each update. That's how I see it anyway. Don't take it personally if people aren't reviewing. I didn't review the first two chapters of your fic but I found it immensely pleasurable to read. I actually added this fic to my Update Notification list which I rarely do. I think so far you have an excellent mixture of comedy and angst with a touch of romance. I like that your Ichigo and Rukia aren't sugary sweet to one another. Your characters are realistic and that's a great attribute to have in and fanfic. The pace is pretty steady as well. I don't find myself skipping ahead past paragraphs and paragraphs of drabble. I will give a more extended review at your next update because I don't have the time right now. Just know that there are those like me out there who appreciate this fic but are too lazy to review :) Please don't hold it against us.
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Title: shit
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 02:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
and now she slept with renji...ouch! I dont thik Ichigo will be able to handle it*girns evilly* but Im still confused about something and its the fact that Renji and Ichigo act like they dont know each other...I mean by the time Ichigo defeted Renji, they knew each other well enough...Hmmm maybe you are trying to get somewhere I dont know...anyway update soon!
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Title: Gasp!Gasp!Gasp!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter makes my toes curl--whether from delight or horror I'm not sure. (It's a good horror by the way, the "OHMIGAWD I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE/HE DID THAT!!!" Kind of horror.) I really can't wait for the next chapter, this story has so many curveballs it leaves the reader gasping for more! XD I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear I hope you update soon...this is a good cliffhanger, I guess Ichigo thinks that she slept with Renji....damn it! Anyway,you write good, your descriptions are good and plot is also good...keep on writing, because its hard to read a fic lately, unless you write your own=) oh and the grammer wasn't that bad, you dont have to worry, I saw/read worst...
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 00:13 CDT
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Wow. I'm actually embarrassed of myself, I can remember bits of that episode of Moonlighting! :D Kudos to you for making the connection from Bleach to that old detective show. You got it down pat -- I vaguely remember the look of disbelief on Bruce Willis' face when he find the other guy there (his brother?!) at Cybil Shepherd's place. Great job so far -- this is an interesting spin on Bleach. I'm curious to find out how you play out the scene where they knock each other out. (I hope I remembered that, too, correctly.) XD Big big smileys for you!
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Title: WOOT WOOT!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! YOU PUT IT UP!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!! Seriously, I was wondering where you were going to put up your story! It's so good! But don't leave us on a cliffhanger!!! Man, I'm actually dancing around the room! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue!
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