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Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job. You really have sold me on this pairing with this fiction. I like the dynamic among all the characters and the passion.
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Reviewed By: Kari Izumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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Hmmm. I have to give you kudos for doing a fic that actually acknowledges that the path to true love can (and usually does) have a few detours. I wasn't too sure about all the characterizations myself, but overall it wasn't too bad, and I put it on my faves' list :)
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Reviewed By: mj805 On: December 26, 2007 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! tou shoudl definately post another again
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Reviewed By: haruchan On: December 21, 2007 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story!! This is one of the best ones I've ever read. and all of the characters are very in character so good job! Will be looking forward to your next IchiRuki fic!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 01:45 CST
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really great story. gotta love it.
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Title: My jaw is still on the floor...
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story definately deserves 10's all around. I mean, seriously, that last chapter was so intense it was f**king amazing! Ichigo's reaction to Rukia and Renji was so believeable and still very dramatic, I loved how he trashed his room and then later, when Rukia came, she actually got advice from Kon, KON of all people! I loved that part... and Rukia's pseudo-confession to Ichigo?!?! That was priceless. I loved--absolutely loved--the passion and anger and hurt that went towards the scene before one of the hottest sex scenes on the planet. I mean... wow... I just... wow. I mean, your style was perfect, the portrayal of the characters was perfect, and the damn intensity of that sex scene blew my mind away. And I swear to whoever is upstairs if you don't get 20 reviews I will go in and write all of them just so you can put up your other story! Bravo bravo bravo!!!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 22:38 CST
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I really enjoyed that! Nice work and a great way to end things. I look forward to reading your next Ichigo Rukia fic in 2008.
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Reviewed By: cola1012003 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 21:29 CST
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i truly enjoyed this story, your play on emotions between the characters was fantastic and the feud between Renji and ichigo was very believable. Rukia came off a bit selfish in the end but overall it was a job well done.
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Reviewed By: Janzo the Ashbringer On: November 22, 2007 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well. Never thought I'd see Ichigo falter like this. Never thought I'd ever see such an emotional strain between them. Never thought I'd read an X rated fic. It's amazing though, and I urge you to continue writing.
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I was trolling around ff.net and I saw your story posted there before here. So I read it anyway! My god, I can't believe this chapter. At the very end I really thought that Renji and Ichigo were going to start ripping each other's vocal cords out. It was awesome! And when Rukia started crying and she kissed Ichigo for the first time! The chemistry was amazing! Oh, and at the very beginning... I adored the portrayal of the relationship between Ishida and Orihime! Their scheming adds flavor and mischief and I love it! (And I can't believe you're making us wait until Dec. 15th! Ah well, I'll consider it a Christmas gift. XD )
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Reviewed By: sharan On: November 21, 2007 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoah! ok drama! i cant believe ichigo is so stupid he wont tell her i like the way you keep them in character. ichigo and renji are extremely stubborn i love it!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: sharan On: November 16, 2007 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. it got me hooked and i have been waiting for the third part forever! do write more!
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Reviewed By: Nee Chan On: November 10, 2007 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot.I really enjoy reading your fanfic and I hope you would update it As soon as possible.The title "Tell her" is really good.I'm just totally curious on how Ichigo will tell Rukia that she's the one that makes him unusual.I just hated the part when Rukia gave herself to Renji.Keep up the good work and please inform me when you are done with your masterpiece here's my email add gionic_01@yahoo.com...Continue writing IchiRuki fanfics.... Take Care and God Bless!!!
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. You do know how to write a fantastic cliffhanger... GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!! Good god, the ending... and--and... the beginning, and the sexyness. Too much. Just too much. Okay, things I absolutely loved about this was the way Ichigo covered up his confession to Rukia, that was funny and almost too over-the-top. I was laughing for ages. I also thought the way Ichigo defended Rukia was so chivalrous. :D Your style makes this story so perfect. It's descriptive, to the point, and passionate. I love it. I also love the witty dialogue between Rukia and Ichigo. I can just see them sitting in his room, talking just like that. XD But seriously DON'T LEAVE ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGER!!! Update soon pleeeeeaaaaase!!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Isabella68 On: November 07, 2007 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. The plot is wonderful and I love the fact that you are keeping Ichigo and Rukia somewhat OC. I am not a fan of the Renji/Rukia pairing, so I hope you plan on her telling him NO to his proposal or possible even I'll think about it. The only thing I wish you wouldn't drag out Ichigo's unwillingness to tell her he loves her. He wants her, needs her and loves her. She deserves to know before she makes the biggest mistake of her life by staying involved with Renji. She won't be happy with Renji, that much you have made obvious. Please don't make us wait too long...bring them together soon. WOW...I love a story that makes me rant like this...It's my way of saying you have written a fantastic story. Please keep writing.
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