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Reviewed By: cola1012003 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 21:29 CST
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i truly enjoyed this story, your play on emotions between the characters was fantastic and the feud between Renji and ichigo was very believable. Rukia came off a bit selfish in the end but overall it was a job well done.
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Reviewed By: Janzo the Ashbringer On: November 22, 2007 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well. Never thought I'd see Ichigo falter like this. Never thought I'd ever see such an emotional strain between them. Never thought I'd read an X rated fic. It's amazing though, and I urge you to continue writing.
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I was trolling around ff.net and I saw your story posted there before here. So I read it anyway! My god, I can't believe this chapter. At the very end I really thought that Renji and Ichigo were going to start ripping each other's vocal cords out. It was awesome! And when Rukia started crying and she kissed Ichigo for the first time! The chemistry was amazing! Oh, and at the very beginning... I adored the portrayal of the relationship between Ishida and Orihime! Their scheming adds flavor and mischief and I love it! (And I can't believe you're making us wait until Dec. 15th! Ah well, I'll consider it a Christmas gift. XD )
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Reviewed By: sharan On: November 21, 2007 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoah! ok drama! i cant believe ichigo is so stupid he wont tell her i like the way you keep them in character. ichigo and renji are extremely stubborn i love it!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: sharan On: November 16, 2007 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. it got me hooked and i have been waiting for the third part forever! do write more!
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Reviewed By: Nee Chan On: November 10, 2007 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot.I really enjoy reading your fanfic and I hope you would update it As soon as possible.The title "Tell her" is really good.I'm just totally curious on how Ichigo will tell Rukia that she's the one that makes him unusual.I just hated the part when Rukia gave herself to Renji.Keep up the good work and please inform me when you are done with your masterpiece here's my email add gionic_01@yahoo.com...Continue writing IchiRuki fanfics.... Take Care and God Bless!!!
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. You do know how to write a fantastic cliffhanger... GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!! Good god, the ending... and--and... the beginning, and the sexyness. Too much. Just too much. Okay, things I absolutely loved about this was the way Ichigo covered up his confession to Rukia, that was funny and almost too over-the-top. I was laughing for ages. I also thought the way Ichigo defended Rukia was so chivalrous. :D Your style makes this story so perfect. It's descriptive, to the point, and passionate. I love it. I also love the witty dialogue between Rukia and Ichigo. I can just see them sitting in his room, talking just like that. XD But seriously DON'T LEAVE ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGER!!! Update soon pleeeeeaaaaase!!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Isabella68 On: November 07, 2007 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. The plot is wonderful and I love the fact that you are keeping Ichigo and Rukia somewhat OC. I am not a fan of the Renji/Rukia pairing, so I hope you plan on her telling him NO to his proposal or possible even I'll think about it. The only thing I wish you wouldn't drag out Ichigo's unwillingness to tell her he loves her. He wants her, needs her and loves her. She deserves to know before she makes the biggest mistake of her life by staying involved with Renji. She won't be happy with Renji, that much you have made obvious. Please don't make us wait too long...bring them together soon. WOW...I love a story that makes me rant like this...It's my way of saying you have written a fantastic story. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: jen15 On: November 07, 2007 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy your style of writing, and your story is well thought out. Your grammar could use a little work, a few words flipped around but nothing to lose sleep over nor does it affect the story itself. hope to read more soon. thanks
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 13:44 CST
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As a fellow fanfiction writer I can tell you from experience that readers here at MediaMiner just despise reviewing. I'm not sure why exactly, but they do. I think the best measure of whether people like your stories or not is how many hits you are getting per chapter. It shows that people are interested enough to continue reading your fic at each update. That's how I see it anyway. Don't take it personally if people aren't reviewing. I didn't review the first two chapters of your fic but I found it immensely pleasurable to read. I actually added this fic to my Update Notification list which I rarely do. I think so far you have an excellent mixture of comedy and angst with a touch of romance. I like that your Ichigo and Rukia aren't sugary sweet to one another. Your characters are realistic and that's a great attribute to have in and fanfic. The pace is pretty steady as well. I don't find myself skipping ahead past paragraphs and paragraphs of drabble. I will give a more extended review at your next update because I don't have the time right now. Just know that there are those like me out there who appreciate this fic but are too lazy to review :) Please don't hold it against us.
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Title: shit
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 02:45 CDT
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and now she slept with renji...ouch! I dont thik Ichigo will be able to handle it*girns evilly* but Im still confused about something and its the fact that Renji and Ichigo act like they dont know each other...I mean by the time Ichigo defeted Renji, they knew each other well enough...Hmmm maybe you are trying to get somewhere I dont know...anyway update soon!
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Title: Gasp!Gasp!Gasp!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter makes my toes curl--whether from delight or horror I'm not sure. (It's a good horror by the way, the "OHMIGAWD I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE/HE DID THAT!!!" Kind of horror.) I really can't wait for the next chapter, this story has so many curveballs it leaves the reader gasping for more! XD I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear I hope you update soon...this is a good cliffhanger, I guess Ichigo thinks that she slept with Renji....damn it! Anyway,you write good, your descriptions are good and plot is also good...keep on writing, because its hard to read a fic lately, unless you write your own=) oh and the grammer wasn't that bad, you dont have to worry, I saw/read worst...
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 00:13 CDT
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Wow. I'm actually embarrassed of myself, I can remember bits of that episode of Moonlighting! :D Kudos to you for making the connection from Bleach to that old detective show. You got it down pat -- I vaguely remember the look of disbelief on Bruce Willis' face when he find the other guy there (his brother?!) at Cybil Shepherd's place. Great job so far -- this is an interesting spin on Bleach. I'm curious to find out how you play out the scene where they knock each other out. (I hope I remembered that, too, correctly.) XD Big big smileys for you!
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Title: WOOT WOOT!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! YOU PUT IT UP!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!! Seriously, I was wondering where you were going to put up your story! It's so good! But don't leave us on a cliffhanger!!! Man, I'm actually dancing around the room! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue!
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