| "Can't Accept" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: eh On: February 27, 2008 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
what the FUCK was that!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Raccoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it !!!!! I'm an anti-Pokéshipper because I hate Misty and I think this fanfic of a psycho-Misty is really good !! I also think that she unfortunately has a crush on Ash and what if he rejects her ... I like the idea of the story and the grammar and style of writing are great. And take this as one of the best compilments of your life because I'm strongly critical ! Wish I could read more fanfics like this one.
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Title: can't accept
Reviewed By: nruff1 On: July 18, 2006 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was the best i read so far plz make a #2
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Title: ash ketchum
Reviewed By: thu On: December 03, 2004 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear ash ketchum how are u do you hate team rocket tied you up i have pics for you so you to see do you like pikachu i love you i miss you i like you do you love misty do you love jessie rocket love thu
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Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! I'm glad Misty got arrested though. Could you write a sequel where Ash meets May and falls in love with her but Misty comes back and tries to kill May? Thank you!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 10, 2004 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehe that was hilarious you rule!
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Blue1 On: February 08, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Who cares if Misty, "wouldn't do that", or, "she cares about Ash" . I was great how she pulverized that bastard Ash and totally demolished that stupid pervert Brock. Next time, be descriptive.
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Reviewed By: kagomehaspower52 On: January 19, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting a little wired but good. One question, what happened to pikachu? she just was gone. and i think u should have put more detail in the rape seen, i would have enjoyed that
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Reviewed By: Angry Mafioso On: January 05, 2004 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to write a sequle were Ash finally leaves on his journey met's that May and a new guy, but Misty comes back for whats owed to her.
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Reviewed By: 97 On: January 05, 2004 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I all ways knew misty was capable of that but shit she fucked Ash and Brock up,man. It was a great combination of horror, aqnd comedy only because as kids we, most not were I come from, never thought that could happen to them. Ash become 1/8 males in this country.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell hath no fury TILL a woman was scorned. I thought you did a masterful job, with such dark thems. Ash got wooped pretty easy buy misty, If i was Brock I would did what Clint Eastwood did in Blood Work shot her in the arm with a .357 Magnum Revolver. And force her to show me where he was. You gotta countiue the story let Ash get some Restatution.
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Reviewed By: ssodangoatama On: December 30, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. A little scary though.... not for english dub viewers. I like your style of writing and the way you present the details. Keep up the good work, but next time, try not to kill Brock, kay? *brock fangirl...*
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Balamb roast On: December 07, 2003 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although you didn't go into a descriptive rape scene, it was evident that Misty wanted Ash, and wanted him now. I think Brock getting clobbered complimented Misty's fury and made the story even more interesting then it had previously been.
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Title: odd
Reviewed By: kurama lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:38 CST
Comment/Review:
it was a very odd fanfic, but well-written. I liked it, except for the whole killing brock part. this was the first darkfic that i've read, and it was very impressive.
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