| "Faith of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 16:43 CDT
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Wooow Hinata snapped! But Sakura kinda had it coming anyways. Kakashi reinstating what the 3rd said to Iruka just felt so right at that moment *nods*. To think Hinata is a Jinchuriki though, yikes. Great chapter! (I'll read it on ff.net starting now because of the 'problem' on this site)
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 15:37 CDT
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That was a good flashback. The two parts that mostly made me laugh was Kakashi taking care of an infant Naruto and how Naruto almost ended up Hinata's brother lol. It's too cute of a mental pic of Kakashi holding an infant with a confused 'please help me' look on his face. Great chapter can't wait to read more =^_^=
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 04:31 CDT
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Ok I like the new attack from NaruHina that was an upgrade. Sakura knocking them on their butts is funny as heck. They undoubtedly made a good team. The end tactic was hilarious. Blowing up the book is priceless I'm surprised Kakashi didn't cry lol. I'm curious about the 'family matters' now though. Argh must read on! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 03:54 CDT
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Good first chapter! Hinata would have most definetely been different if she went with them. I love how you kept to the actual happening in the anime but changed it enough to still make sense for the fanfic. I still gotta wonder what Hinata got out of the training. Can't wait to read the next chapter! *adds to favs*
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: April 29, 2008 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry that someone has done this to you. You are a good writter and I hope that you will up date soon. And I hope that the story gets put out of the FF.net. Please update soon. I love the story already and I am mad that someone did shutes a stuped thing please update soon. Thank You.
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Reviewed By: I Come Anon(ymously) On: April 26, 2008 22:17 CDT
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I found this and saw the notice, found the copied story and reported it. Also, did you take down the first chapter here, because I see only 2-8 plus the notice (which means I'm having to read the stolen chapter to figure out what's going on).
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Reviewed By: MasterBrattan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 15:44 CST
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i have a feeling that it's shukaku who's awake. and the one thing worse than a crazy tanuki, is a cranky, crazy tanuki.
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Reviewed By: MasterBrattan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 14:22 CST
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definately different, making hinata's mother minato's team mate rather than hiashi. i hope the rest is as good as what i''ve read so far
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic!!! it really AWESOME!!! well keep on writing and UPDATE SOON!!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!
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Reviewed By: kccranfield1 On: November 03, 2007 20:23 CDT
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I just discovered this story and I love it. Keep up the good work. It's great.
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Title: Thank You!
Reviewed By: Amaleea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo!!! I have found a Naruhina story where Hinata stands beside Naruto during Shippuuden! Yahoo for Hinata also being on a team with Sakura and Naruto! Another cheer for no Sai! He certainly wouldn't give Naruto the encouragement that Hinata would give him. I love the twist where Hinata is also a demon-holder and the story why is very believable to me. It was also amazing that Hinata got to go on the long training mission with Jiraiya and Naruto. I also like that Hinata's mother was Minato's teammate. The last part of the latest chapter was awesome! Gaara fighting back... now that was a great idea. I couldn't help but cheer out-loud when I read that. You really have a wonderful story in the making. Please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh. i laughed my ass off reading this chapter. it was GREAT! rofl. shino. it really is the quiet ones you have look out for. please PLEASE upate soon1
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:16 CDT
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Awesome! Absolutely awesome. Very interesting and well worth reading. Keep updating, this is great.
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Reviewed By: Acemack On: October 21, 2007 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is neat I curious on how you plan to spin off the main story with all of this. I hope when you do it is going to be even better.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 14:24 CDT
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OH SHIT, GAARA"S AWAKE AND PISSED!!! Lol, this story is pretty interesting, very much worth my time to read, and soemthing I've enjoyed reading thus far. Please continue to update, this is a very good story.
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