Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ach Laily,your hobby is to make me cry! First i removed my contacts like always are the charas realistic "...no one was as annoying as Shigure when ill" this IS Hatori 100%! "When she was alive-" I realize my darling Akito is dead, and Shigure's hearth is brocken...cry... poor Akito watch the sky this picture...cry louder... "never this bright" the moon will never be bright for Shigure,now that Aki is gone. (Hatori and Akito...you never write about Hatori's feelings for her!) "I could have forgiven her anything." spasmodic sobbing "She's gone forever, and I can't bear it anymore, Hatori," too much for me i needed a rest,blowrags,water... Hatori let at last Shigure go...honk "You sleep now. Everything will be alright in the morning."lie!my eyes are deep red... after reading this story...I was so empty (because i hadn't anymore water in my body?) and i knew i would read the story again (after 5 minutes!) You own me a cheerful story! I can stand another sad one! but..." Whether you can fulfill this or not is a story for another day." thank you ps.hint of shounen ai???well??? ps2.i didn't review at fanfiction.net, because I mostly go mad, when I visits this page!I will start to read again at 01.01! ciaui!
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