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| "Garrotte" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: brownwa On: December 17, 2007 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the changes made to chapter 1 and chapter 2 flowed really well. The description of the chief auditor was pretty vivid and I could actually picture what he looked like. And I enjoy the dry humour throughout the story (if it is intentional?). Especially the part about the chief being "a hero for auditors everywhere". I nearly choked on my keyboard! :-)
| Reviewed By: brownwa On: December 13, 2007 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the cast and I want to hear more of a description about Bermuda. The setting sounds cool. Also I want to read more about the bum, he seems like a fun character. And I really like the quirky aspects of the story and think they should be exaggerated more. This has the feel of one of those action comedy animes. Some slapstick humour and irony would help me get even more into it. :-)
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