| "Uptown Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 00:34 CDT
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Hey! An update! To be honest, I haven't read anyone else's story in so long. Looks like everything's coming together, now. See you next time!
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Title: Exciting!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:58 CDT
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Poor Jade. I thought the men's 'pissing-contest' was fun, trying to one-up each other. And poor, poor Kagome. It just doesn't stop for her, eh? I hope they don't kill Muso when they find him. Strangely, I don't feel bad for Kikyou, LOL. And WOW, we haven't seen Inuyasha in a loooooong time!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 15:09 CDT
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interesting story. don't like it that kagome was raped but otherwise pretty good plot. update soon
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 13:40 CDT
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Haha, that naughty Jakotsu... I don't blame him, though. Kouga is one fine piece of youkai. Now I'm just wondering where Sesshoumaru is...
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 01:30 CDT
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Now I know how other people feel when they read my stories and say "I feel so bad for Inuyasha..." I really do feel for Bankotsu. Glad to see you're still working on this, even though you could be doing so much else with your time, haha.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 22:35 CDT
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Haha, I was cracking up when Jade was dancing on Jak's lap! I wonder what she's up to now...
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 13:19 CDT
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It's getting exciting! All three of them! Poor Kouga... I guess he didn't take into account how cold Mountain Lake water is...
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 23:13 CDT
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Ah, it's getting exciting! I want to see what happens when Sesshoumaru is allowed to run wild... And man... Bankotsu in the car with Kouga... that's gotta be one awkward ride! Poor Jade, when she finds out about her kitties and Kagome... YES! Bon Jovi and Pat Benetar! Good taste, Jade, Good taste!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:02 CDT
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You're so much better than me at updating. Then again, I have two stories, contests, and other deviations I'm working on... Anywho, poor Kagome! And poor Bankotsu. I've really come to like his character. I'm at the point where I don't know if I would rather her be with Kouga or Ban... Funny how Inuyasha's new interest sounds like she looks like Jade... haha! Great job... See you in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 00:13 CDT
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You know, as much as I like the whole Jade/Kouga pairing, I find myself feeling bad for Bankotsu. He's so sweet in this, and he really loves Jade for who she was before she went into the Army. So sad. Anywho - the arrival of Jakotsu! I haven't said anything (because I don't like giving away too much) but Ban and Jak are actually going to be showing up in Choices soon. I think in chapter 15... They are two of my favorite characters. I'm so happy you updated! But now I have to wait again, lol. Great job and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 22:39 CDT
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Yay! An update! I'm glad Bankotsu finally got his feelings out - Jade really needed to know what happened. I really hope we see Kouga in this next one, as well as checking in on Kagome, Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and Sango. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 16:04 CDT
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LOL That Kagura is one conniving bitch! This is getting exciting. I hope to see more soon! Good luck with your writing...
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 19:59 CDT
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Well, you really hate Kikyou in this, huh?! Haha... I like how you named the shope the "Red Wolf", seeing that Jade is, essentially, a red wolf. I'm not a fan of Harleys - I'm a sport bike person myself - but Jade definately feels like the type of character that would ride a bike. Good job!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 19:36 CDT
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It's me, InuyashaSesshomaru from deviantART! I just wanted to tell you quickly that I'm not a fan of Mary Sues, but this is interesting. I'm going to keep reading. And we have similar taste in cars!
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