| "The Ubiquitous Plot – A Parody" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: TheSorrowfulVampress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was quite amusing, is all I hafta say. *laughs* Armwrestling...
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should do another chapter where she is running through the woods crying getting cut up by the foliage and after she's good and bloody tips over a root and passes out and is found by SOMEONE and... well you know how it goes from there... lol I love this parody and I hate this plot device (well, I guess it was ok the first ten times I read it) almost as much as I hate the running through the woods thing (done well only once as far as I know). So, thanks for the giggle.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 01:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Didn't see that one coming. Figured there was going to be some kind of twist, hence the entire purpose for your parody, but that last line had me chortle out loud. I completely agree with your outlook on that particular plot device. It's been thoroughly used to death, resurrected, and then used to death once more. Good job!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 23:24 CST
Comment/Review:
so... you gonna continue it?? just kidding, that was great. you forgot to say he was an ass to her so she had to leave after smashing his face into the ground a couple hundred times and then came back and saw... i have quit reading kag/sess because there is no other reason she'd fall out of love with yasha unless she caught them playing 'hide the snake'.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was hilarious. I loved it. I too get tired of that particular plot line. Your parody was very good and kept the reader guessing until the last line but also fit the scene well.
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Reviewed By: BaneOfSociety [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I love you. In other words, awesome little parody.
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
In all seriousness, this is awesome. Thank you for putting a new spin on an overused cliche plot that was stupid to begin with!
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