Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay I'm the first reviewer! This was pretty good actually. I am not usually a fan of OC's, or "future" stories that have nothing to do with the characters, but I could deffinitely see that these characters were well thought out, much like their parents, but well thought out. I found Shinichi's mother having been one of Yuki's lovers a different, if not rather convenient, twist but, like I said it's still really good. You made a few slip ups in your wording, but nothing major, and nothing that took away from the story in anyway. I'm interested to see where this is going to go! All I'm wondering is who was crazy enough to marry and have a kid with Ryuichi... I have a few guesses, but I won't say them here, I'll just wait and see! ^_^ ~Bakayasha
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