| "Universal Deathmatch" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Some Dude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write another one! Put Tails in the main event teamed up with Heather from Silent Hill 3. In my opinion the only better team would be Tails and Fox McCloud.
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Reviewed By: Mousey the ruler of cheese [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
PLESE, OH PLESE MAKE A OTHER ONE, PLESE!!!!
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Reviewed By: CeciliaDiaz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mr. Grey Fox I love your Universal Deathmach series. I have an idea for you: Write another series called Universal Deathmach II. About the winners of Universal Deathmach going at it. I hope you write it and I also have a scene for one of the chapters that I thought would fit nicely, if you write it. Please write it, please. Please?
~`!@#$%^&*()_+||+_()*&^%$#@!`~
You’ve given Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Draco more tickets to the second Universal Deathmach. This time accompanying them is a teacher of choice.
Hermione: Professor Minerva McGonagall
Draco: Professor Severus Snape
Harry: Rubeus Hagrid
Ron: Professor Flitwick (I don’t know what Ron’s favorite teacher is.)
Each student and teacher has taken a seat facing the arena. From left to right: Ron, Professor Flitwick (or if you find Ron’s favorite teacher), Rubeus Hagrid, Harry, Hermione, Professor McGonagall, Professor Snape, Draco.
Ron: One question: Why are you here, Snape?
Snape: To see how many points I have to take away from Gryffindor for your mouth (think back to chapter 6) and Hermione’s misuse of a mallet. –
Hermione: Grrr *if looks could kill she’d make Voldemort seem nice and sweet*
Snape: –Otherwise, I wouldn’t be here. *mutters* Boring rubbish.
~[({after a while during the fight})]~
Snape: *has Professor McGonagall in a headlock* GET `IM! GET `IM!
McGonagall is trying to pry off Snape but to no success.
Hermione: *grabs mallet and…*
*THWACK*
Snape: †_† *is laying on the floor*
Draco: *sighs* Thank god.
McGonagall: *turns to Hermione* Thank you, dearie.
Hagrid: I `ought he said `is was borin’.
Harry: So much for that idea.
Everyone nods his or her head in agreement except Snape whom is still out like a light and Draco whom is mystified because no one has hit him yet.
McGonagall: Draco…
Draco: *turns to the professor* Hm?
*WACK*
Draco: *barely conscious* You……too?
*thump*
Draco falls to the floor next to Snape.
Flitwick (or if you find Ron’s favorite teacher): Why’d you hit him?
McGonagall: Easy, for bringing Mr. choke-me along.
~`!@#$%^&*()_+||+_()*&^%$#@!`~
It was just something I thought up. I hope you use it in your Universal Deathmach II. (As you can tell I really want you to write it {pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease [please]})
I wonder if anyone agrees with me? |
Reviewed By: Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 11:30 CST
Comment/Review:
That was rich GF it had me LMAO!!! |
Reviewed By: Billion Dollar Princess On: November 04, 2002 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!! Poor Vince! Mercury have a little bit of badness in her, ne? Thanks alot |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end... How I despies those words sometimes... *glomps Kaiba* Hehe. Well, everything must come to an end. Great deathmatch fic! Free for all! |
Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Very fun. I think this is about the best death match fic I've seen. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyahahahahaha!!! ^^; Ok, I'll shut up. Great chapter, Grey!!! *glomps Kaiba-kun* I wanna Kuribo handpuppet. Ph34r 7|-|3 f|_|rry (r347|_|r3!!! Next chapter...last...? >. |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
*curses* Stupid html tags cut off my review. Anyway, I love the part with Jou-kun and Mai. It's just so them. Poor Peggy's always so tortured... Hehe. Great job, Grey! |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i never thought ne1 would tkae everything I love, Wrestling, Video Games, Anime, And Magic Books, and put them into a fic this damn good! Keep it up its great! |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't usually read Deathmatch fics of this kind but this was great! it was great and carries some rememants of a MST fic. characters were sorta OOC but it's justified in this type of fic. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: razorknight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the sixth chapter was GREAT. Keep it up, Fox... Any chances of a Goku vs. Kenshin Himura match?? I mean, they both fight a lot, and the fights usually last for several episodes in both series... And both have moves no normal human could ever dream of doing... Err... I'm ranting, ain't I?? *Shrugs* I'll be back. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like your story, so keep it up!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: razorknight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 08:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
What can I say? The two previous fights were good, this one's better. Keep on the hard work, Grey Fox! |
