| "Amnesia" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 21:50 CDT
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aaah! you're killing yohji? ps agree with skyrat
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 12:48 CDT
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I loved the description of the doctors as buzzards. You did a really good job depicting Aya's panic through his fractured thoughts.
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Reviewed By: me On: June 01, 2008 20:17 CDT
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another great chapter! ack! i'll be cliche and say 'poor yohji!' your description of the watch was marvelous
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: May 31, 2008 20:10 CDT
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Surprised Aya didn't get a memory jolt from seeing and smelling the blood from the mission. Poor Yohji indeed!
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 11:47 CDT
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I love the dialogue in chapter 7. I think you capture their personalities perfectly. Poor Yohji ;_;
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 23:04 CDT
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aaah poor yohji. So damaged, so mistreated. Hope Aya doesn't keep him waiting long (can you tell who my first love is?)
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: May 21, 2008 00:32 CDT
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This continues to be excellent and interesting. Can't way for Aya to remember more!
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 22:09 CDT
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Heh! I forgot to read chapter 3 when you first posted, so I had quite a lot to catch up! It's sounding to me like Ran had been up to something where he and Yohji both knew it was likely that something might happen to him (other than the obvious assassin stuff.) I'm really curious to find out what. You do an awesome job keeping the emotions really tense and tangible. I like the idea that Yohji's wearing Aya's earring. Well, I just heart this verison of Yohji to bits.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 21:56 CDT
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oops looks like i missed a few chapters of updates *pout*...upset with myself now. Hmph. Poor Yohji, I hope Aya remembers soon...
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Reviewed By: H On: May 13, 2008 12:45 CDT
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I want moooaaar! No, seriously, this is great and has a lot of suspension. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: May 11, 2008 23:52 CDT
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Poor Yohji!
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Reviewed By: @met On: May 02, 2008 04:24 CDT
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first, thanks for yohjixaya story! they're the best! XD but such lack of it, ne? I loved the story from the beginning and will be lookin forward to it, please do continue, anticipating what happens next.............
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Reviewed By: me On: April 30, 2008 08:45 CDT
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O am enjoying this story! i like that we've heard about Aya's pain in trying to remember his past and been painted a picture of how Yohji is just as (if not more-so) deeply affected by the amnesia. Must be excrutiating to be faced with a lover who doesn't even remember your name and be told he'll be taken away if you try to lead him to remembrance. Was it really a car crash that caused Aya's memory loss? or is that just what they told him since they couldn't very well say 'well, you got brained on our last mission by some sadistic psycho you were trying to impale on your katana...'
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 23:18 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this so far. I liked the comparison of trying to remember to the feeling of a sneeze that won't come. I liked Aya's observations of things, especially where he 'assumed they were flowers and not mistakes.' I really like your style.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 22:09 CDT
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yay! a new aya x yohji story...keep writing! *pwease*
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