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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 10, 2008 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
it seems pretty good, a lot of cliches tho, and the phrases "what happened at the coffee shop" and "what happened four years ago" are repeated a lot, which gets kind of annoying after a while. other then that, it's alright -on chp 2 btw-
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Title: another great in tha making
Reviewed By: Dani44 On: July 06, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool and great.. You are a really good writer. I cant wait till you update again... PLease make it fast PLEASE, PLEASE....
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Reviewed By: klachcik On: June 27, 2008 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it's so angsty :) please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, and you still keep the arguing between inu and sessh up perfectly. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Im really interested in the story.. cant wait to read more.. please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 3 was hilarious! i loved it! Cant' wait to see what song Kaggy's got. And I bet it's probably about Inuyasha. Update soon!!!
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: lil-lostii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha sessy is funni i looove it lol and kagome is a good growler lol nxt chap plz?
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Srry it took me so long to see this, but it looks like you still got it. Can't wait to see the update.
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Title: another great in the making
Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great. i can already tell it's gonna be a good story. i thought it was very good. plus, funny. really funny. can't wait until the next update. P.S. this isn't a teaser review. i really mean it. just act like i'm a random reviewer like everyone else.
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