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| "Our Reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha that was a well crafted one shot! Yeah I remember after reading Ch. 317 I totally like squeeeed (wrong way to describe how I felt, but I can't think of putting it any other way to put it right now XD) when Ichigo and Rukia had their little "reunion" and Rukia had to tell Ichigo to go save Orihime (who he seemed to completely forgot about once he saw Rukia and had that big smile on his face XDD). It was a good read. A little bit of angst yet still very passionate. There wasn't much dialogue, but then again actions speak louder than words, and you were able to portray that beautifully with your writing. It was hot, passionate, sensual and sweet. What else can I say? Overall a great job and I hope you keep writing your fantastic stories! =]
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...thats all i can say right now I think!!! That was crazy good, very hot! It was so emotional and heartfelt, I understood his pain and fear, this is really good. First I get there eye smex in 317 now I get to see what they were thinking about in that chapter! If only kubo would give us this!!!
| Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to be the best writer of IchiRuki writer EVER! u always write everything with such depth and passion. it is truly AWESOME writing! i could NEVER write with as much emotion as you. It's just WOW! well it was another great fic that i TOTALLY loved! u did an AMAZING job on it.
| Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 13:25 CDT
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You know, I was hoping you would write something based on Ch. 317. Because I reckoned you were the best Ichiruki writer to turn what happened in 317 into something more passionate. So, yeah, you have made me one happy camper today. Thank you, thank you!... If the universe were mine, this is how Bleach would end. But since it isn't, I'm glad you're an Ichiruki writer :-) Thanks!
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 11:49 CDT
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you reallly are a master. gosh! i knew i wrote something kinda like this, but the way you have described their meeting in the last manga chap is just so amazing. it's a perfect description, or narration of their meeting. i love it. and how they saw each other again,i can actually feel their need to be close to each other. how deperate they are for each other.amazing how just one look, a glance and a few choice words could mean so much. i am so falling in love with ichiruki again!
| Title: SQUEE!!!! @_@
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it. This is the most profound and highly erotic reunion I've read so far! My goodness, the intensity of their passion and how you captured that one moment when he first saw her… and how descriptive! I could see it all playing out before me… wow. Your style of writing is so immense! I cower in your presence!! I applaud you. You hit the nail on the head every time, girl! Well done… and you know what else that's so amazing about this? It's the fact that you, like so many of us ichiruki fans out here, get that panel when Ichigo sees Rukia. He's relieved and happy all at the same time. There is so much love there! Do you know how many reunion stories will pop up since that last chapter??? But I'm sure they won't hold a candle to this one… ~gokusgirl
| Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy you wrote this! =D Now, if only Kubo would be so good to us mehehehe. Beautiful job my dear! So many emotions and it was just so beautifully written! You got the atmosphere down perfectly for chapter 317 and the remaining part flowed so wonderfully with it! Great job!
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