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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Exciting chapter! And its nice to see that Kagome isn't completely helpless in this fic what with her cool gymnastic skills and all. Dover is an interesting character, too. Kind of like another InuYasha. I liked the whole scene with Kagome a lot, where she runs away, gets chased by those girls, and attacked. Really action-y, and if thats any indication of how the REST of the story will be I can't wait to read more! Till next time! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 06:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Great opening chapter... I wonder HOW bad things can get in one week... lol... It certainly seems like they might just drive each other insane...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks really good! You wright great stories! And I love reading them!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting so far i'm liking it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting please continue.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really like it.. please continue!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Bejeeberz!!! I absolutely luv this fic!!! I really hope that u can update soon!!! (But don't forget about ur other fics...)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is really good :D
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Reviewed By: r4k {NLI] On: July 18, 2008 19:00 EDT
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Like it? Girl this is going to become my new story. haha. I actually stopped reading fanfic for months.. but I thought why not im bored. I am so happy i checked it out. This is different. So you just got a fan. =D
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very interesting, hehe. I like it! First chap and already an OC to boot! Lol. This is a good start. Update when ya can! ;)
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Title: Shweet
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was looking for another great Inuyasha fic(Cause you finished Dessert Rose) and i look in my mailbox and imagine my surprise when you have a new story. This one is great as well cant wait for more
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another fantastic start to what I'm sure will be yet another fantastic story! Original characters don't bother me in the slightest. I mean, come on, it's an "AU" story we're talking about, so technically, they are ALL original characters. Just because we name them Inuyasha and Kagome, it automatically makes people think they are the same people? I loved Desert Rose, and I love Nightwalkers. Would it really change the story if you plucked random names from the original manga to rename all your other characters? Come on people... So in closing, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! As always you've written one of the most original fics I've ever seen. This does leave off with a lot of questions so I can't wait for the next update to see if any of them are answered ;) And I don't think the OC's distort the story at all. It's cool to see how authors make their own characters interact with Rumik's and it's not like they steal the show or anything. But anyway, kudos to the start of another new and VERY interesting story. ~Amber
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is good as so far and i hope you continue it because i know ill be happy with it
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 06:08 EDT
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i like this. one would think that if her girlfriends don't rat her out to those boys she'll be fine. one would also assume that yasha would be the bigger target as he humiliated them to a greater extent. i will be looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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