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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow i see real potential in this story so please continue writing it! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: r4k [nsi] On: November 23, 2008 12:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Well i like it. and i really hope you continue this. so im wondering whats gonna be so special about kagome. is it powers, her money, or something else. so syked keep it up. =D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at home but not loged in on my new laptop... On: November 20, 2008 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good!!!! can't wait for more!!! Kagome is a bit of an idiot... walking out like that in the middle of that type of street... but she wouldn't know any better...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Exciting chapter! And its nice to see that Kagome isn't completely helpless in this fic what with her cool gymnastic skills and all. Dover is an interesting character, too. Kind of like another InuYasha. I liked the whole scene with Kagome a lot, where she runs away, gets chased by those girls, and attacked. Really action-y, and if thats any indication of how the REST of the story will be I can't wait to read more! Till next time! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Great opening chapter... I wonder HOW bad things can get in one week... lol... It certainly seems like they might just drive each other insane...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks really good! You wright great stories! And I love reading them!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting so far i'm liking it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting please continue.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really like it.. please continue!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Bejeeberz!!! I absolutely luv this fic!!! I really hope that u can update soon!!! (But don't forget about ur other fics...)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is really good :D
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Reviewed By: r4k {NLI] On: July 18, 2008 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Like it? Girl this is going to become my new story. haha. I actually stopped reading fanfic for months.. but I thought why not im bored. I am so happy i checked it out. This is different. So you just got a fan. =D
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very interesting, hehe. I like it! First chap and already an OC to boot! Lol. This is a good start. Update when ya can! ;)
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Title: Shweet
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was looking for another great Inuyasha fic(Cause you finished Dessert Rose) and i look in my mailbox and imagine my surprise when you have a new story. This one is great as well cant wait for more
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another fantastic start to what I'm sure will be yet another fantastic story! Original characters don't bother me in the slightest. I mean, come on, it's an "AU" story we're talking about, so technically, they are ALL original characters. Just because we name them Inuyasha and Kagome, it automatically makes people think they are the same people? I loved Desert Rose, and I love Nightwalkers. Would it really change the story if you plucked random names from the original manga to rename all your other characters? Come on people... So in closing, keep up the good work!
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