Reviewed By: rachealjob192gmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very nice fic. not like the ones i have read. keep it up you will get better at this, trust me. put in more detail connect the events, EX, how would vegeta know that she would come back to brake in to Goku house to get her book, yes we know that she would but you need to tell/ show how.
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