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| "“Angel of Twilight: Clockwork Breakdown”" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: My Favorite of All Time
Reviewed By: Halibel On: August 06, 2015 08:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found your story years ago on AdultFanFiction, followed as you
posted chapters, and reviewed a few times. Since then, I've read
your stories over and over. Eventually, AFF cleaned out a lot of
older stuff, and I think it was removed. I scoured the internet to
see if you posted in other places and I am so happy to have found
you again! I love how you write, give the characters depth, and
your enthusiasm and author notes. This is seriously one of my
favorite stories of all time, not just of fan fiction. Your writing
gives me exactly what I want in the emotions and experiences of the
characters (and the sexy bits too, lol) and it is so hard to find
that. Seriously your story is now a favorite that I curl up to
read. Please don't stop writing, you are amazing. :)
| Reviewed By: Pickle Green On: April 02, 2009 00:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy heck, this story is great. I visibly cridge at the parts with Riku and "Ansem," and though I doubt I could...write something like that, it's...dark, which Riku and Ansem dwell in. I was laughing at Demxy's and Axel's past, and your Roxas is just dead-on. Usually people make him think meek or girly character, but that kid is tough as nails and people forget it. The only thing that I can think of as a complaint is the rather long author's notes and footnotes. They slightly take away form the seriousness of the writing, but since they only appear at the edge, it doesn't hurt the flow. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: KairiTakishita On: December 28, 2008 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I was too lazy to login so I just wrote my username ^-^ Anyway, this was THE best Kigdom Hearts fic I've read to date. It is absolutely creative and original and you have no guidelines to have. This is excellent. It exceeds everything. And it's sexy. ^-^' Keep going. I love this, I will definatley keep reading it.
| Title: marvelous
Reviewed By: sammysyd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just came across this for the first time today, and have been unable to stop reading it. This is marvelous and quite sexy. I love how Riku is sensitive to the blonde jokes. It made me laugh. I absolutely love the writing style. And the strong, yet weak Riku is absolutely extraordinary. I felt so bad for him when he was crying. Keep this up, I'll definatley keep reading.
| Title: Answering the Review Call!
Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged in) On: November 08, 2008 22:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't blame for not reviewing earlier as this is my first time coming across this fic and I always prefer to review on the most recent chapter. But I do want to say I love this story. Though your Ansem teacher scene was rather....unnerving that you knew all that and taught us that (though indirectly). I love how you have different characters using different aspects of out culture and the lack of understanding of the behalf of others (ex: riku and blonde jokes) because I find it quite realistic (and common sense) that not everyone knows what Indian style is. I have to admit I feel really bad for Riku, and I wanted to see Roxas act out a bit more violently to Fenrir in this chapter, but oh well. And that zer/zhe/zir what everthingy is ingenious. I know you mentioned somewhere the idea wasn't yours, and I'll have to steal some day. I never really thought about Nobodies having memories before, but I guess it makes sense. They are just the empty body left behind when a heartless is made and the body does have kinetic memory, so other memory fallows. And the whole switching of gender forms is interesting, will you be explaining what that happened or no, not really?
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