| "Her Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Give me a name On: August 25, 2008 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! It was so cute, and funny too. you did a good job with Hatori, I nearly cried at the end, it was adorable!!! Good writing, keep it up!
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Title: Beautiful Canon
Reviewed By: Vert Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Clean and beautiful. A diamond. This story has excellent style and is remarkably true to canon especially in the area of Kyo. His voice was clear and accurate and his response to the birth perfect. You didn't quite understand what was happening right off, but drew you in. I especially love that you named the child Kyoko. Perfect. Its naturaul comfortable and exactly what they'd pick. In short, Bravo! I hope you write more.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lovely very sweet piece darlin' I do love your work :)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
so cute
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