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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: January 26, 2009 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm in love… I'm only at chapter 15 but I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm in no way an avatar fanfic connoisseur as this is the only one I've ever read but I've read 300+ fanfics of all kinds and I must say that this is one I will defiantly recommend to people if not read again. I have absolutely no idea how this fanfic can have such few reviews but hears one to add. As a said this is the first Avatar fanfic I've ever read and I don't even really watch the anime but I love the way you portray all the different characters. The fact that they don't automatically end up together, like in most stories, I really like. You know the stories where its set up from the beginning that they'll end up together? Ya… you started you story in a way that they're both content with where they are in life. It's only later that that begin to realize its not where they want to be. Well anyways that's all I really have to say for now but I'm sure I'll review again as I get further in the story… Oh and in case its not implied PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY… WRITE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Kanna
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 13:34 EST
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Now this is what I was waiting for. Awesomeness! Dang, Azula-well at least she had her revelation before doing that. I was like wow. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omigawd O.O...................... omigawd OoO...................... i did NOT see that coming omigawd :O that was awesome! so much waiting. and u didn't disappoint. i loved that chapter. it was so suspenseful. and attention grabbing. i couldn't stop reading! excellent writing and beautiful story!
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Title: My Months of Waiting
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 09:54 EST
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Okay I've finally gotten around to reviewing-school and stuff... The lemon was great and his fears of creating a child showed how much depth you give your characters. So awesome job. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 04:15 EST
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Holy crap, this story is AWESOME! I'm a fan of avatar, and glanced at this at first out of boredom, but you really did a good job at getting your hook into the reader, and they'll just continue to read it up! It's an incredible story, and a good take on canon, even twisting things to how many Zutara fans feel about the story. I mean, seriously, Zuko with his old squeeze? True, Mai's feeling may not be obvious, but they do show up, probably when they're alone. That's my only real complaint. Still, to me there is something disturbingly wrong about azula. Did something, well, freaky happen to her as a kid? Because the way she acts in canon, it's like she killed her mom, and made her a part f herself. Or worse, she was forced to be the replacement for her mom for Ozai. That particular thought disturbs the hell out of me, but would make sense with how much of an asshole he was. Still, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters! Very exciting, very cute, and extremely well written!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 22, 2008 07:23 EDT
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Nice work on the lemon.
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Reviewed By: Noshia V. On: October 20, 2008 09:20 EDT
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I've definately converted from Jetara to Zutara. This fict is awesome!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 17, 2008 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work as always!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 16, 2008 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was brilliant! Offering Hakoda that as dowry. I would've never guess that about Toph. I like this story, it keeps you on your toes.
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 15, 2008 08:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Revenge is best served hot.' Wow, brilliant line!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 13, 2008 08:24 EDT
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I feel bad for Mai, that's gotta be rough. I hope they make it to the Fire Nation quickly.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 09:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i feel bad for Zuko's hormones xP
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 07, 2008 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Aang has the final say?! I'm standing on ends. I can't wait for more updates! :D
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Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 22:38 EDT
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Three amazing chapters so soon.....i must have been good this year and got x-mas early!
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