| "Bunny's Delight" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Daikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great read I enjoyed it a lot, and would definatly love to see any 'missing' scenes.
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Reviewed By: Fu Mon Chu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just thought you should know that this is personally one of my favorite stories out there. I've read most of your other works over on FF.net and really enjoyed them and low and behold this fic exceeded my expectations. I saw all the bullshit that was said over on the fanfiction forum and most of the people over there must have their heads up their collective ass about this story. Its premise is original, the writing is flawless and most of all its HOT. Any author can be the most precise technical writer out there and still not be able to capture the heat of the moment in words. That is something you have in abundance and that is why I read your works. You can write in a way that elicits a possitive emotional response and that is really the only thing that matters. Keep on truckin, I can't wait to see more of whatever you decide to do.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let this be a lesson to others as to "Eating Crow"... I feel rather stupid for my previous reviews of this story. While I maintain that there was no real attempt at attaining a 'true' balance between Ranma's two forms...it _was_ an interesting story to read, overall, and worthwhile to read, if not more than a little frustrating at times. In the end analysis, however, Ranma _did_ end up a female that could become male (and if it weren't for all the girls wanting to ride the 'Wild Horse'...Ranko would be unlikely to be male ever again, save as a disguise). Still, I stuck with it and found myself enjoying the story to one extent or another. As a suggestion, you might, as I stated in an earlier review, attempt to pen a _true_ balance story, one wherein Ranma does _NOT_ prefer being female over being male...or vice versa. One wherein Ranma-chan does _not_ feel _compelled_ to have sex with _lots_ of guys, but perhaps one or two, and finds _himself_ just as interested, at the outset, in females, rather his male form always playing 'Catch-Up' with his female form. And in the end...having no strong preference for either gender, or being either gender. In short, having attained _balance_, as opposed to preferring male lovers and being female.
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Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tried to continue reading, but your insistence on keeping Ranma an utter ignoramous, making the club owner practically omniscient in regards to altering 'Ranko' towards being a complete and _horny_ female (seeming with no prior knowledge that 'Ranko' doesn't really exist), makes this totally unpalatable for me. Just as in your other fic "Playing with Ranma" your concept of 'balance' is decidedly skewed towards a nymphomaniacal Ranma-chan that'll spread her thighs for anything with a dick and willfully ignorant Ranma-kun that even once he discovers the joys of sex as a _male_ is fairly indifferent about actually putting any effort into having sex while male. Just once, I'd like to see you write something that actually tried for a _TRUE_ sense of balance rather than these blatantly skewed travesties. I'm sorry, maybe it's just that your attempts always seem to focus on making Ranma entirely female in mind, body and soul _first_, before then attempting to backtrack and bring his male side up to speed. In the end, for me personally, these just read as yet another turn Ranma female-with-a-male-curse fic.
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 09:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I guess your version of Ranma has never been subjected to potions or mind-altering plants or magical artifacts, as the possibility never once, even fleetingly, crosses his mind. Nor apparently has he...excuse me, _she_ ever experienced a single instance of arousal while female, despite how long she's been cursed to become female.
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks again for updating I want all your fanfics updated. ;) Please update any as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was HOT. You could have had Ranma get Kasumi and Tofu together by seducing them both. Eh? Tofu might blossom, just as Akane did?
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Reviewed By: TJG On: March 15, 2009 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Looks good. A sequel would be nice.
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Reviewed By: wolf40k [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stress enough that a sequel is both required and demanded. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DTravler On: March 14, 2009 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad to see you finish this even if I would like you to write more so few finish there writeings let alone lemon ones it is much enjoyed when the story is done though I would like to see some of the loose ends cleaned up and I would like to see secqual as well thank for the great read
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Reviewed By: testcase On: October 05, 2008 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Story Hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story so far. I've read some of your other work and this is just as good as the others. Keep up the good work and I hope you don't get writer's block ever again. XD By the way.. what happened to your website?
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my favourite Ranma lemons.
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