| "Waiting For You Beyond the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww! that was so good and sad i still have tears running down my face
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Title: aljdaojigs
Reviewed By: stayperfectlystill [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this (even though I cried, I really did) - really emotional and sad. I honestly thought he was going to die, but thankfully, he did not.
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Title: naruto
Reviewed By: Hokage Naruto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY HOPE U UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was excellent. I really loved the pace and the way you conveyed the drama without making it over the top.
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Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 02:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
::clap clap clap:: I am moved. A very good oneshot. 9 out of 10 interdimensional entities agree: This was a great story. The last one prefers long, multichapter stories to oneshots. Good luck. Poor Naruto-kun... The Goliath's Commandment - Our resolve is Adamantine, and no evil shall stand before our righteous might!
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