Reviewed By: GlitterKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like an interesting fanfic. Meira is really similar to Namine almost. It's fun to see how you put her in the different situations and incorporated her character. There are some slight grammar mistakes that aren't major, but also you might want to try to describe the scenes more. For instance, instead of saying something looks beautiful, describe it and prove that it looks beautiful. Overall, it's a good fic. Usually OCs are annoying, but Meira seems good-natured without being overly sweet. You're a very good writer and I hope you update soon.
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