| "Paramour" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sayo!!! (ME!) On: January 25, 2009 13:07 CST
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hello!!!!!!! you finally updated it. THANK GOD. i praise you. AND you spelled "paramour" correctly. good job. it is not complete. -steeples fingers-
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Reviewed By: it's the girl who you beta for, foo' On: January 07, 2009 18:31 CST
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... -.- REUPLOAD THE CHAPTER, my dear. before a certain authoress' head explodes. making it impossible for the two of you to go to japan together. and you don't want THAT, do you? no, i didn't think so. SO THEN FIX IIIIIIT! T_T
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Reviewed By: ghoulgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great i love it, but the description of the guy seems more like shippou, still it's a great story
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...this is cute and all, and I know you said not to complain, but....not even the description of the guy is anything like InuYasha...this could stand alone as an original short story! You've obviously got a lot of talent, but this one-shot is under the wrong heading...mediaminer has an original story section, too.
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 22:34 CST
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P.S. ... plus, there's just the evil spacing of DOOM to factor into this equation. T_T
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 22:30 CST
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... well... i don't think it's any good. ESPECIALLY since you spelled "paramour" wrong. -.- what, my dear, am i supposed to do with you?
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