| "Holy One From Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good, i wonder how kurama will react when he finds out about kagome
|
Reviewed By: JaneyJane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 20:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad at all, but please use spell check. Or get a beta. Misspelled words ruin the flow of a story and makes scrambled eggs of the rest of your grammar. The dialogue seems somewhat off as well, and as of yet there's been no explanation of Kagome's feudal era friends. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 02:41 CST
Comment/Review:
this sounds good so far, i would like to know what happened before this started. what happened with inuyasha and the others? who is kagome's teacher? what happened after she learned she was a demoness?
|
