| "Gencom Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: GunnerRyuzaki_KonohaNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2011 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far but i noticed you've not written anything more for a long time... i do hope to see something new soon. |
Reviewed By: inuboy86 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 20:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter but I hope that the Kunoichi Seduction Techniques doesn't mean they have to sleep around because I would like to think that they have techniques that make it unnecessary for such distasteful techniques?
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Reviewed By: kyuubis-child On: May 19, 2009 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Please update soon as i want to see how Naruto reacts to having a bunch of girls/women getting into his pants.
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Reviewed By: GatorLHA On: March 09, 2009 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice theme, lots of potential keep it up
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Reviewed By: inopig123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not really good at reveiws but here it goes... That was a really good story I hope you rwrite more of it. It was interesting how you made Naruto the same and yet was aBle to make him help others the way he did.
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Title: -_- Not Impressed
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 07:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Multiple reviews in one. 1st: You should check the scifi/fantasy/supernatural sections of Adult Fiction sites. I've seen at least ten stories very similar to this one (sans good guy Protagonist). SoW/S&G/EF are low due to your grammar errors. Fix that, then those three will go up (esp. S&G). I am stating facts. I don't like those kinds of stories, but Harem fics are common for Naruto, and often make even LESS sense. Let that sink in. Reality Warping Genie in a Laptop makes more sense than most Naruto Harem fics. That's almost as Fucked Up as a jew (looking at you Ben Stein) blaming Darwin for a Self-Loathing Jew commiting Genocide against his own race (little known fact about Hitler is that his father was jewish). No matter. Improve Grammar, and I will continue to read and make very limited negative responses, while TRYING to keep them constructive. 2nd: ::Hanicas's eyebrows twitch violently:: Naruto, please tell me... WHERE IN THE NINE ASS-RAPING HELLS OF THAT FUCKING PIT CALLED BAATOR DID YOU FIND MY LAPTOP!? THAT THING WAS BANNED BY THE GENEVA CONVENTION AFTER SOME RETARD USED IT TO END THE CONFLICT IN THE MIDDLE-EAST! That was only problematic because wishes take the path of LEAST resistance. And the path of least resistance to ending the conflict in the Middle-East was the total erasure of EVERYTHING there, leaving a massive whole in the earth where a part of the crust just vanished. ::Rock Lee Style: Supersonic Eyebrows-look-just-like-parasitic-caterpillars-feasting-upon-his-forehead No Jutsu; Luna is no more, Terra now has it's own ring system:: ... I was not aware my laptop was perverted, otherwise I would have introduced it to my Level-12 Bio-Hazard Stomach Acid. Ja ne, now I must worship the mighty Karakasa no Shizumaru Hisame. The Goliath's Commandment - ::eye-twitch:: I AM NOT JESUS! ~ Hanicas's response to being in the presence of Christians P.S. - If I have insulted you, then I am sorry. Autism messes up interpersonal skills.
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Reviewed By: Burring Truth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now this is a good one I really woundn't mind seeing you upadte more chapters for this. And I do think that for any others that you could have Naruto use the Gencom on you should look to the Naruto moives and filler arks from both the manga and anime for those and possiblely bring out some of the lesser seen characters, like for ex. Tsume Inuzuka, Shion, Sasame Fuma, Yakumo, or maybe even use it to mess with some of the f-ing wankers from Akatsuki might even be fun if Naruto used it to pull a prank or two who knows. Well now with that sead I really think that I should give you props for thinking this up and putting it down like this and I do really hope that you continue this one to its finally So I hope to see a new chapter up when you can get it, but till then I wish you good and happy writting. Latter. :)
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