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| "Gencom Danny Phantom" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mermanelf On: November 06, 2009 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write more! This story is great! And very sexy too!
| Reviewed By: Tobi the Good Boy On: August 29, 2009 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, very nice job you got here dude. I liked the little things you put in, like Danny actually thinking over potnetials and taking a risk assesment of them before taking action. The only thing I dissagree with is Desiree being the largest threat. She's up there, but her powers are depentent on other people 'wishing' without thats she's really...well, weak, probably the weakest ghost in the series actually. I think the biggest threat would be Ms Spectra simply because sh is Vlads equal as far as scheaming and planning. The womans got a brain, which puts her above most of the others. Added to that her ability to absorb misery and you have a high level threat. Ember is also up there. She's actually more powerful than Spectra I think, but she's not as good with the whole planning thing. I think she's right around Danny's level of power from midway of the series run, which ranks her as the 4th most poweful behind Dan, Danny, and Vlad. Another thing to watch out for is that the Gencom might be affecting Dani since she is Dannys clone. It would be funny if he keeps doing all these things to make himself more popular to the ladies and she winds up getting a few herself lol. Just some ideas, I hope to see this one get updated soon, its my favorite aside from White Suduction and A Wiser Generation (which I hope to see Blair/Rei added to in the future. Till next time, Ja Ne! Tobi's a good boy!
| Reviewed By: Tobi the Good Boy On: June 13, 2009 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story you got started here. The fact that you have several others all following the exact same thing (the computer program) kind of takes away from it a bit though. Still, I look foward to seeing this story continued in the future. The possibility of Ember being made into a Haffa is something I really look foward two, kinda like an older punkish version of Sam ne? So many possibilities lol. Till next time, Ja Ne! Tobi's a good boy!
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