| "Ramen Delights" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Udon On: April 28, 2009 08:45 CDT
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The first thing I noticed was that you made a huge mistake in the summary.
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Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 02:23 CDT
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just AWESOME! loved the ideas. ::sniff sniff:: im so proud of Hina-chan. update soon!
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Reviewed By: mikeyguy2 On: March 25, 2009 15:23 CDT
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i just thought i'd leave this one for you, great writing, i definitely like this series. very good, interesting concepts. in chapter 6 i think, you made a typo. you said the inspiration for the chapter was The Love in Me by Shakira at the beginning, then said it was Hips Don't Lie by Shakira at the bottom. Keep up the good work ^_^ ja ne
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Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!
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