| "Away From the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: chocolate11 On: July 15, 2011 02:28 EDT
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i didnt think i would like sesshoumaru as a submissive but it works out really well. i really like this story! |
Reviewed By: Jayden On: June 19, 2011 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really interesting; can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: herenthere On: April 19, 2011 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to have you back. :) |
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2010 18:12 EST
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What's happened 2 u? It's been 4ever since u've last updated. I hope all is well with u. Hope 2 read something soon. B reading U! |
Reviewed By: inuyashafan2010 On: October 22, 2010 03:37 EDT
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I love it...MORE MORE MORE lol cant wait til u update looking out for it
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Reviewed By: Caelestis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2010 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fanfic. My second time reading, sorry I didn't leave a review the first time. I read stories twice unless they're really short so I don't miss anything. As more chapters come out I'll probably review chapter by chapter. Anyway, poor Sesshomaru. Feel so sorry for him. I'm glad, though, that he's getting stronger as the story moves on and Inuyasha starts to influence him more. I mean, it's great that Kagura's there for him as a friend, and she's probably helped a lot in getting things going, but the love Inuyasha is showing him is what he needs. I was really glad Jakotsu didn't go through with the rape. I kind of wonder about that guy, if he'll come in more and maybe become a better guy, eventually become a sort of friend to Sesshomaru. Dunno, just seemed like a good idea. A kind of ... paradigm shift. Rin's a cute little angel. Glad you kept her there with Sessh, they just seem to really go together in and outside the anime/manga. Please update soon! I'm dying to know what's going to happen to that bastard, Naraku! I'm seriously tempted to use my mad manipulation skills and send my character--a fire elemental--to burn him to ashes, not before giving him the beating of his life, of course, lol. Hope to see more of this fic up soon!! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 03:50 EDT
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I feel for Sesshoumaru. Even though I have never been through what he's been through I understand the how deen one can place them self in their own truth. It's kind of said that he just now seeing where he went wronge but hopefully he will lern from all of this. But about the story I love it. And good job to InuYasha he did good.
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Reviewed By: jessica fowler On: June 13, 2010 23:11 EDT
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this is really good i cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're posting this here. I hate going to FanFiction. I started reading Flash a little while back. I'm not sure if I reviewed. Sorry, if I didn't. I'm only on chapter four and I'm looking forward to reading more of this soon. I haven't read a lot of fics where Naraku is the dominant partner, and in the ones I have, he's always overly sadistic, but I'm liking this so far. It's painful to read, because you're portraying the mind of the battered partner so well, but what makes it especially interesting to me is, though physically he's strong enough to fight back, mentally, he's still locked in. However, he's getting stronger, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in this fic, but now I've got to go. It's freezing over here by the computer, and I can hardly feel my feet.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2010 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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When you come back, you're back with a vengeance. Ok now we should see some more of Sesshoumaru breaking down before he's moving in the right direction, right? How many times has he left Naraku just to beg that he take him back? What made him change so much that he felt that he needed to beat Sesshoumaru? I know that some men just feel that it's needed to show dominance, but alot of them have been through it in their childhood that it seems like the right thing to do. I'm not saying that this is right, just stating a fact. Will you go back to the point when all of this started?
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Reviewed By: Kim1492 On: February 13, 2010 04:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. I find it hard to find good sess/nara angst fic and yours is that and better because it is eventually a sess/inu fic. Way to go and keep up the good work. Update asap plz!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 11:24 EDT
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He's finally leaveing the ass thats good for him. I hope he gose t the dacters the why hes been hurt over the years I'm shore he'll have somthing wrong that if they don't catch abd fix it will couse probulms letter. But Sesshoumaru is so stubring.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 23:04 EDT
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I switch up from time to time. Which ever one will allow reviews. I know Sess has a few more trails to get through before things start to get better. My niece said something to me not too long ago about her boyfriend. She said that when he hits her she knows he loves her and didn't mean to do it. Most people in a relationship even after leave the abusive one be it male/female still believe that things will go back to the way that use to be. Naraku will say that he's sorry and that he has had time to start working on his problem and he won't be able to change with out Sess by his side. I was gong to say something else but I lost the thought.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 14:38 EDT
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So im geussing its time for the rehab part. Im still waiting on so one to kike Narakus ass but i can wait i dont mine. keep the updates comeing.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far Naraku kept her in the dark about so much, but now that she knows it won't be so easy for him. Oh he'll threaten Sesshoumaru with all kinds of things, but Rin is the one who will keep him strong at first and then Inuyasha. I'm hoping that Naraku gets the daylights beaten out of him more like the police.
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