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| "Gencom Spider-man" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Damn sexy!!
Reviewed By: nocontact [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Thank your for this... Seriously. *Sniff sniff* Thank you!
| Reviewed By: Tobi the Good Boy On: September 16, 2009 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice so far. Though you're a bit limited when it comes to possible girls for Spiderman as most of the ones he has been with either got married (Sue Storm) or died (not going to bother listing them all) Off the top of my head, the only currently 'available' girl from his past would be Firestar, Angelica Joanes (might want to double check the spelling on that one) who he dated a bit. She got married, then devorced (might make her a good choice actually) Though there was the aid of Tony Starks that hit on him in Civil war... Oh, you know what, I just thought of two really good possibilities you might want to look into. First is Mrs Marvel (Carrol Divers I think is her real name) She was recently killed off, but then Peter found a way to bring her back using left over pieces of her powers (though she no longer has super powers) she might be a good addition. Then there is Betty Brant, a long time crusher of his. These are just ideas, though I think Peter would appreciate Mrs Marvel... Good work, and please keep going with these stories. Not many people write for some of these series, and the ones that do arent very good. Till next time, Ja Ne! Tobi's a good boy!
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