| "La Puer de Force" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 04:50 CST
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I am most definately intrigued. This seems rather unique and to my great delight it is not running rampant with errors of spelling an grammer. Looking forward to an update
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 16:57 CDT
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I have enjoyed what I have read so far. Its different from other stories and to me that means something. I caught the same errors as the others, but nothing that is major. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 22:40 CDT
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yeah its wounds. a man having a womb let alone wombs is disturbing, lol. its a great story though. i hope there is more soon.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 03:27 CDT
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I like the new chapter but you do have a recurring goof, it's wounds not wombs. It looks really funky to have a guy with wombs which is 1 of a females reproductive organs.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 08:01 CDT
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At first I was like, 'oh no, another Kagome runs away from a Kikyo and Inuyasha scene', but its not like that at all. I would recommend adding something to break up the scene changes, as it can get confusing when they all flow into each other. But you have a talent for writing, and I can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work! ^^
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