| "Hate Is Just Another Kind of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: superb
Reviewed By: darkSkiesReignyDei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the most original i've encountered so far. i dont think you need to revise. its good as a compilation of short chapters. no need to elaborate. sometimes short stories like this is more fulfilling than longer ones... although you need to elaborate some scenes because it gets too confusing as to whom you're talking about. but overall excellent...
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Reviewed By: Kittenbrower [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 11:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it, but I am curious to see how they got to this point. Good job.
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 04:05 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very interesting. Bulma dies from the very start so we wouldn't get a chance to get attached to her. I'm intrigued by what is going to happen.
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