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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha told kagome that she's cured / no more tumor?... that is good news for them... looks like they are leaving mount hakurei and returning to the palace?... seems that sango went to really check if naraku is dead... he appears to be since she didn't find any traces of him... seems that inuyasha & kagome met sango & kohaku as they left mount hakurei's barrier... why was kagura acting that way with abi-hime?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2010 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please update.... love this story
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 18:17 CST
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chapter 16, when i read it i got the feeling that you just didnt really care anymore, like you where just trying to finish up the story. maybe thats why people thought you where done... its honestly caused me to loose interest a little, but ill keep on reading because i mean hey, ive stuck with it this long, why give up now?
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 13:25 CST
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Kikyo wouldn't!...would she? Good update!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 not signed in On: February 26, 2010 22:32 CST
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ahhh! i missed you! lol. thanks for the wonderful update, and can't wait for more! update ASAP! thanks!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha and kagome are together with their babies... but within a barrier in mount hakurei?... will they ever leave and go back to the palace or cannot at this time?... hope kagome does get well so she can stay with inuyasha and the babies... nice that suikotsu went to the palace to inform everyone... will anyone else be able to go and visit or see kagome & inuyasha and the babies?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it really the end? you had so much going on.. and left undone.. please keep updating.
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Title: are you done?
Reviewed By: obsessedinuyashafan - offline On: February 16, 2010 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the transfer between different events and point of views and flashbacks.. was confusing at points. especially when you used the same breakers for kagome's thoughts repetitively for one chapter. im glad you didnt have sango physically raped. and everyones familys survived. although theres been zero mention of miroku having any family other than his cousin inuyasha. i would like to see you further yourself with this story. what will become of sesshomaru and rin? are you going to just FLASH us to when shes older and theyve fully gotten together or leave it forgotten? what of kagura? did naraku dying mean her own death as well? there wasnt much into his other 'spawn' kanna. i'm glad you went so in depth with inu taisho's past. good thinking to end this chapter NOT in a figurative GASP and allow inuyasha to realize they are his children. but what will become of them now? will suikotsu come with them back to the palace and take over as royal healer? did kikyo have any idea what her father onigumo was up to? her reaction when inuyasha asked if she has spoken to him lately was a bit.. suspiscious. but she seems to have been cast as a 'good guy' which i can totally deal with. please update again soon. and please keep in mind my questions and comments. overall loved the story. very creative and orifinal and kept me up til 5am to read it. but dont feel as though it should end yet, if youre up for it. thanks. bai for now.
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Reviewed By: LexiPlexi On: February 14, 2010 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this fanfiction. You have a fantastic talent for expressing the characters' feelings and thoughts without be overly dramatic- just appropriately and believably so. Which is hard to come by in fanficiton writing! lol The concept is great, and I loved reading the chapters with the meeting of the two lovers. Needless to say, I wholly enjoy your story and I can't wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY hope kagomes cancer leaves...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome got a visitor and was saved... looks like inuyasha went into battle with naraku... he went alone?... did inuyasha defeat naraku?... kagome gave birth to twins... and she went out once the barrier was destroyed... they finally meet again... glad that inuyasha realized that the babies were his and kagome's... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm utterly in love with this story :] I just read all chapters up to date and could hardly tear myself away from my laptop, haha. It's so rich with detail, but I don't think it's extremely cluttered or jumbled. And I totally don't hate you for Inuyasha and Kagome breaking their bond. In the end, it only made them realize how much they loved each other and that it was indeed, natural to do so.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 17:29 CST
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YAY!!!!!!!!! Everything's good again! Almost... Kagome's cancer is going to leave right? Right? RIGHT?!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORE YOU!!! OMGoodness! *tear tear* that was sooo beautiful and I am so glad that they found each other!! Please Update ASAP! Thank you so much for writing this fic! you are amazing!
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 13:24 CST
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Omg i'm like crying that was so sweet!!! They're together thats so great!! Plz update soon it was great!!
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